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Noted! I'll fix it once I get to editing the chapter.

That was exactly what I was going for! But I think I missed placing a few more details. I'll keep it in mind when I get around to editing the chapter.

nice catch. fixed!

Going for something later in the book! stay tuned! :)

ahh that's better. fixed!

you got it!

Ohh, nice catch!

Thank you! You don't know how much this already made my day <3

Now, I'm not usually one for Female MC leads, but this one got me hooked like a motherclucker. it's a fresh style of writing. and it's funny as hell. It's not everyday that you see writing like this. The author has a way of working *emojis* in the writing. If you like that. I guess you're already hooked in reading. If you don't? Well, I may have a few things to say, so please read on. The emojis are part of what makes the novel *unique* in a sense, its unique in that it not only helps define the scene, it also helps the reader get sucked into the story. You might even catch yourself trying to shape your face into the emoji you see, and that's a good thing! not only are you getting invested, you're even (well maybe) getting a feel of how the characters' emotion at the time. Now, if you still get put off about it, that's fine, you could just ignore it, but why would you when it makes it interesting? The writing quality is so good that it just flows naturally, the changes in scenes are pretty well planned out, you just don't get hit with something new, you get eased into it. If I had to nitpick though, I'm just a bit concerned with how often this gets updated. I do hope this gets more chapters in the future, especially with how promising and fresh the writing style is, this is something I'd definitely come back to once it gets more chapters. TLDR: READ IT! ITS GOOD. Emojis are good. and Good job author!

love the emojis in the chapter!