Ji_Yidao

your novel was front page yesterday under the new reads section, which is how I came to find it. like I said perhaps I'm judging you too harshly but I really do think your writing is very amateur and childish. it's not just you though theres quite a few novels on this site that are that low quality, just that this was one of the most aggregious examples.

perhaps I was being too harsh, however I really do think your writing is too amateur. 100k views isn't good at all for webnovel, your book was on the front page and yet it only has a fifth or even a tenth of other novels views that came out around similar times. the novel only gets 14 power stones. you can try to just spam our shitty novels over and over and make money that way but let's be honest the quality just isn't there yet.

he himself doesn't know why he is this way, so why would they be able to understand?he is essentially bewitched by an evil God from my understanding

a truly smart killer would just learn to make a ring himself. they seem common enough. or try his hand at getting a lesser noble title. the nobles seem to he able to kill marks however they please outside of broad daylight.

if you think about it, it doesn't make any sense at all. how can wars be fought if literally anyone can rank up during a fight and become almost unkillable? granted a lot for people have lower potential than the few but it would still make wars a nightmare to fight. no general could ever guarantee a win when any random enemy soldier could suddenly rank up and become godlike. it's obvious this was introduced to flex the mcs powers but it's definitely a plot hole for this to be a common thing anyone can experience.

that sound op as hell, only 10k gold? every adventurer that isn't a noobie should have one...

yes it's very random I'm confused why Wally didn't teach him lightning magic when he was training for the lord. he definitely needs some power ups but it is kinda random.

that seems unlikely, they are a warrior clan and she already stated that her mother is strong. they don't seem to discriminate since kalliope is being given full training. it's definitely odd that women seem to be powerful in every society in this medieval world but the author is a woman so it can't be helped.

the death flags are many

they will all die and MC will go to the dark side and get super op. Rena might live because she seems like the authors self insert, but I think they will be separated so that the MC thinks she is dead. he will then go to war alone and meet kalliope from the visions. this is my guess.