WillMissQ

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I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks

2017-10-27 加入United States

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WillMissQ8 days ago
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This just feels like the most blatant power fantasy insert. He’s a murder hobo. He’s a sociopath. It’s disappointing.
Ch 4 Chapter 4 - Free Folk's Camp
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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I was even more surprised when a giant passed by me and Lucis with a stake in hand; it was different from the giants I knew, these wore more clothes and were much more robust. I would say that they would defeat the ones from Skyrim. We continued until Lucis took me to a large tent, but before we entered, she stopped me, speaking for the second time in days.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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"My new husband here knows how to kill and didn't waste any time; the crows turned to ashes as soon as we burned the bodies," she said cautiously, hiding the fact of what I did in front of her with the crows.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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“Let me tell you a story”
"Before we start killing each other, let me tell you a little story," I said, my voice exuding power and a hint of anger.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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Ahhhh yes, the typical Chinese tropes that authors on this website seem to always carry over, even into fanfiction.
"Yes, you're right, Zonri, but we can't let such a beautiful savage die. She looks as beautiful as a noblewoman. We should have some fun with her before we return to the Wall! We can even take her with us and get rid of her in the end. Our nights will be better that way!" said the leader again with a wicked smile.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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Today, I was surprised by her in the midst of the silence when she started to open up. I think she got tired of the silence of the last two days. I just enjoyed the conversation; I'm a talkative guy. In Skyrim, I spent my adventures talking and laughing all the time with my companions; I even sang in taverns with bards. Many considered my voice the best in Skyrim, even my lover Elisif was in love with my songs.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
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Ironic because their whole culture and relationships between men and women are built on raping the woman. When you take the woman, you have to beat them and subdue them and then rape them. I guess it’s kind of consensual for their culture but like if you break it down, it’s rape.
We were descending the hill towards the forest. At the beginning of our journey, I just wanted her to guide me to Mance. On the first day, she was quiet and cautious with me, saying nothing but walking and guiding me. But she always looked at me as if I were a predator who would kill her at any moment. I don't blame her; I'll kill her without hesitation if she betrays or deceives me. She didn't even sleep at night because she thought I would try to do something, but I didn't pay much attention to her. When I sleep with a woman, I prefer us to be united with mutual pleasure, and I killed all the rapists I found in Tamriel. The last two days were quiet with nothing but animals and snow along the way.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ8 days ago
回復 mrblood388
The group quickly brandished their weapons, keeping a safe distance. I stopped walking and crossed my arms, a slight smile adorning my face as I looked at each of them. It was evident how cautious they were, understandably surprised to encounter a shirtless, barefoot, unarmed man dressed only in pants in the midst of that inhospitable landscape. However, my presence did not convey the typical image of a "beggar" in the snow. Besides appearing comfortable in that icy climate, I stood out with my two meters of height, athletic definition, bright purple eyes, and a face that would make any woman want to spend a night with me in her bed. I maintained confidence, facing the threat posed by more than a dozen people as if it were a passing breeze.
Game of Dragonborn.
作品衍生 · RaccoonLeague
WillMissQ10 days ago
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Oh no. The queen of escalation had things escalate? Who could’ve ever seen that coming?
Everything had escalated quickly, too quickly for anyone to comprehend fully.
Worm: Friends From Other Places
漫画同人 · Writing_Shirou
WillMissQ10 days ago
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Ironic
Summoning Successful! World's Greatest Hero: Homelander
Worm: Friends From Other Places
漫画同人 · Writing_Shirou

I Can Be A Hero?

Jake Griffs was a normal guy. He just finished high school, has no girlfriend, and is just starting college. He thought that his life was going to be typical and average but that all changed when the rules changed. One day, he was reading an old Superman comic on his laptop when giant meteors start to fall all over the planet and one crashes into his dorm building. The concussive blast knocks him out and when he wakes up later, in the hospital, he hears a voice telling him, "Superman System activated." ~~~~~~~ Literally a brand new author, I am writing this just because I'm bored. Enjoy. This will go where the readers take it. I will create a discord and we can talk about some characters and I will be taking advice on my mistakes. And English is my only language (no need to worry about shit grammar). Thank you. I don't own the above image. I just thought it was cool. Never will go premium and don't accept patreons. Just enjoy the novel. Let system-chan make your day. Discord: https://discord.gg/yBxcpX5

WillMissQ · 其他

2.8

30 Chs

What is this Superman System?

This is my reboot. Gonna work on the synopsis later. I suck at them lmao.

WillMissQ · 其他

分數不夠

3 Chs