VynDahl

Using the word "honestly" makes a person seem less honest and trustworthy. It's typically assumed a person is being honest when they speak. Additionally, if you want to use a word like that find synonyms. It's too repetitive to read the word over and over again.

Not for now. I kept getting lukewarm and poor reviews, and I lost interest. Writing a fanfic should be fun for both me and the fans. I'm leaning towards an original story, non-fanfic. What kind of novel do you think people like?

There's no way.

Boston has a population of 650k+ so, I doubt there are hundreds of thousands of zombies. Thousands maybe.

see comment in previous paragraph

He wants to see the war end sooner because he has other things to do.

This is a typical "biggest fist is right argument" that we read in these novels. The heroes in many fantasy novels are amoral, but if you could say they have a moral foundation it is nothing more than the world should be the way I want it to be because I'm the strongest -- might makes right. It's stupid.

This paragraph explains why they want to kill him, but the author's suggestions about other motivating factors like "he might win an election" make zero sense. Additionally, given his abilities, would it be too unbelievable that he could sneak in and assassinate the Emperor? Maybe these reasons and motives make sense in Chinese politics, but not in America at this time.

You can't just break the rules. The Constitution, the balance of powers, and the Amendments aren't something that can just "be broken." To break the rules, you would need to have a civil war. If you think that was possible during this time of history in America, then you are wrong.

It's a dumb way to assassinate him. It's clear to everyone that if he dies it's because that's what the US government intended.