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‼️‼️This is Book 1- Meaning it ends with a Cliffhanger/open ending. (book2 or continuation is yet to be seen)‼️‼️ A bit decent to say the least. Still an Enjoyable read. ... You will see how the author is newbie writer while reading and no offense but I strongly feel that the author suffers from ADHD somehow. I read the whole thing and here's the truth... this one was a failed Xuanhuan rip off. The plot, the world building, characters and story progression were all over the place. I would say that the author would get a lot of hate for his writing as even I wants to curse him sometimes for ruining a seeming good plot, also the open ending(nah it's just disgusting Cliffhanger) and our "MC" Yang Su and squad were still lovable. (Li shen? who tf is that guy again?)

I thought it was Lucy that came back? I've been noticing a whole lot of inconsistencies lately, like lith making a vow to focus on cultivation and practice celibacy till emperor rank and lith gave deciples mission in the human continent then next it says they stayed at the castle, training or something. ☠️ I don't know, things are just getting really random and main wives have no screen time (where's the lovely Emilia). The World war was a big bust and all it did was make a whole mess of the world politics for whatever reason. Side-Char system guy is forgotten again. We keep getting new girls and the plot is all over the place. Good thing I did not buy privilege.

My man Wang Zhong suffering from success! It must be the work of the Fate Stone...

I didn't find anything "Original" here. Cliche heroic mc with thick plot armor. References a lot of characters from popular works like games, animes and other novels. The story is roughly base on chronicles of Valhalla and it's myths. As I said nothing original, aside from the goats which author eventually left aside and went for the boring harem picking route. The Copyright god is angry reading this work. It might be good for newbies but for readers who have read a few novels like me, I don't recommend reading this at all. I read past 1200s chapters and Dropped, which I should have done earlier.

Got Axed! Rip Author I was really looking forward for this one but... F** this author.

Girls do look funny and lewd when they do that 🗿 also while s*cking hard while trying to look you in the eye🥴

*cough* Albedo *cough*

How I wish Hikaru Genji would give his best Novels the love and attention they deserve instead of making new "Projects" that he would discard anyways. Gojo, this one and Midnight prince still needs some prooreading. I might suggest that dividing few novels into "Book". Like here he can end the "Book1" after the conquest of the Mortal Realm. Take some time off and do his other novels, while thinking out the outline for Book2 for future continuity. My man hikaru have written like 6 novels that he discarded like some cond*ms after being used.😆

Sol has turned into a Master of Stripping! she Cover the Mounds, he Attacks the sacred grounds🗿

I recalled of a novel of the same name, Limit Breaker, a good read. Andar's pride seeps into his very being. Even in his new body he thinks of the God, given that his main body is capable devouring even himself. The pride of a Primordial can't be contained even within a fleeting reflection of his true self.