AlchemicMartial

how do you keep getting names wrong as well as changing them it isn't that hard to remember otherwise it is a great read

good story but you keep changing mc name

i hope this isnt done but then again most of the different but good ones get dropped i know this is a complicated story to write being stargate/harry potter but this is one of only maybe 3 good stargate stories and none of them are very long or have finished

you gave him gold like the sun now give him white or silver like the moon balance and all that as for his clones specters is good cause in mass effect there are good and bad ones they get the job done how they see fit and if he teuly wants balance that will be for the best

this is a good story. Unfortunately, it seems the translator doesn't read comments starting at 520. The chapters start to be in the wrong order or are skipped and haven't been fixed in over a week

great story i much better translation than others of the same novel but starting at 520 some of the chapters skip or are outright the wrong chapter

wrong chapter

its a great read but you seem to skip a chapter after 240

i get what you're saying, but if it was you, could you honestly ignore it and continue with your writing Authorsbwhonactually care about their works can easily be blocked by stress, and even if they aren't blocked, they can not write at the same level anymore, making it less likely that they enjoy their own story

id give it a higher rating but the first 18 chapters cant be read