NitrogenousBeing
My favorite novels on webnovel.com 1 My own novel. 2 Release that witch 3 Shadow Slave 4 Lord of the Mysteries 5 In another world with the crafting system 6 Loosing money to be a tycoon
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NitrogenousBeing9 days ago發表Haha sorry. I was in a snappy mood. It’s often better to minimize technical terms. I do like that your novel has a larger vocabulary than most, but I had to get a scorpion diagram out multiple times to understand a fight scene. It really killed the flow.
- NitrogenousBeing9 days ago發表
Typo: Slop -> slope
- NitrogenousBeing9 days ago回復 Forteller
Oh so the issue is not knowing the difference between common English and entomology terms because you were a science student without experience in communicating about scorpions with non-entomologists. I see.
- NitrogenousBeing10 days ago發表
Curiosity not curiousity
- NitrogenousBeing10 days ago發表
Why are you (author) using entomology terms instead of common language terms? Are you purposely trying to irritate your readers?
- NitrogenousBeing10 days ago發表
"... tear the skin right out off your bones."
- NitrogenousBeing11 days ago發表
Blood is missing it’s l. “Bood”
- NitrogenousBeing13 days ago發表
How is Uriel so easily tricked? He can really turn off his brain for wishful thinking.
- NitrogenousBeing16 days ago發表
It’s full of filler, but I like the main events and genera. It went differently than I first expected because MC was not alone as long as the title suggests. There are some nationalistic stereotypes, but I didn’t care.
