BIGGRA

I don't know, i understand if the reaction was for just a moment,but to be in a complete trance and unable to breathe for a prolonged time without Magical assistent seems a little overboard. The human's sense of self preservation would have kicked in long ago. But this is fiction so it's not that big of a deal.

This has been a frustrating read, the author is promising a rewarding resolve to the Mc's mystery plan and i still have a 100 chapters ahead of me but there's no excitement at all. Im almost 30 chaps and there has been no payoff at all. I cant even see the potential payoff since the mc's plan is a secret. Im not giving a review since it would not be fair with so much still to read. I would though, if the author reads this, advise him to have small payoffs throughout the story to keep it engaging. So far the nerfs( or limitation) on the wish have been doing the opposite. Fair well,

Do you also have the ones posted anywhere?, i only know of energy in DC. Would love to read them

Curse you author for not giving more chapters😭😭. I even tried to buy your Patreon, but you need a credit card😞

The dialogue of the konoha 4 feels too formal and robotic, but I'm not a writer so take my opinions with a grain of salt

Why is this writing so awkward, the dialogue is horrendous

broo dont cave in, you are right, this whole thing feels forced. Sooo many coincidences all coming together at the same time resulting in the MC being neglectfull is BSsss. This would fly if it was an original story where fate does play a big role. but one of the main points of a fanfic is that the MC, definitily one who has his memories, is not bound by fate and can make changes. I like the story progression but this part was just not written well and thats oke. but dont make bs excuses, you nerfed the MC simple.

although it pains me to be fed mere crumbs, it shall not be in vain if the quality stays the same. May it be so until the story ends, For BIGGRA WILLS IT.

Whoo, whats up with the pacing change

Nice dutch there, was not expecting it😄