GonadSmasher08

it was mentioned that she is just 5'9"

this one?

i think lacks too much information on many things. certain things are forced to happen or used just because, they don't even feel natural at all. this FF needs a lot or work to be considered good writing quality 3/5 the point of shift too suddenly without prior warning sometimes causing confusion when reading the story stability of update 5/5 it has daily updates story development 3/5 i feel like the story has no real goal at all. does he focus on science or politics to get power. understanding something doesn't equate you can control or even view it. just because he understands spatial-temporal law doesn't mean he can see the time flow. character design 2/5 the MC has no personality, is he cunning, lewd or what? world background 2/5 not enough description on what kind of earth the MC resides. General lacks too may information. 1. about the MC or the world where he lives 2. what is rule runes? 3. too little information on the system. i think it is better to name the system "automatic knowledge brain upload"

genosha, since when?

i think you skip a chapter or 2. ace was not even fatally wounded on the last chapter

hmp! with this kind of attitude, many might actually not support you at all. not just for this work but for all your present and future work. threatening your reader with the blackmail of dropping this work when they are not that invested in this work might actually have a opposite reaction to the effect you intended to illicit

using dress-up instead of requip makes it mess up. just use the original name, don't make it weird!