MrRagHand

Poor Alvin

A great story so far!

More energy is nice…. Though I’d prefer more chapters…

I’m trying to read this, but having the () after everyone’s dialogue is incredibly difficult to deal with

Thanks for the chapters!!

I have a signature, it’s in cursive and I’ve used it for the last 25 years to sign business documents and bank statements. I apologize if you’re not a scammer, the massive block of texts copy pasted across multiple pages is usually a clear sign of a scam.

Hahaha I love the shoes walking on their own

Tends to be the case with people who comment the same block of text across dozens of original novels’

Great so far Author! Looking foward to more!

Oh look a scammer!