MJSB

It has a great potential ! Bring and transLate more chapters author-san! Keep up the good work It has a great potential ! Bring and transLate more chapters author-san! Keep up the good work

We can’t see the picture

Ton ton no mi is more Powerful why not choose it

Is the timeline correct or not?

why is your story goes to kakin empire already? you miss the other important events such as messing with hisoka or spiders. and also too much description in every chapter. soo tiring to read. and getting super clinche. and hes getting emotional and too attach to a woman far from the start on how the mc's behavior.

hey author san,i think you forgot to mention the flow of time on where's part of the mc of the main cannon story now.

not only martial arts should he train.. Include also different cold weapon techniques and know their weaknesses, and also different bombs ,guns and missiles .And also real combat experience like war or etc... Just like yujiro hanma in his teen age ,you know.

hey author san what are 10 trillion for? He should use it openly noh?

hey author san! this is a great story soo far. but you should fix your grammar and writing quality a bit or hire a better writer to fix some error.

be in jail ifor ten years