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Seriously they are barely twelve years old 🙄🙄

Lockhart I think

Mild , it's not the focus but yes the main character ends up married at the end.

Thank you that really helped

This novel is the best Harry potter fan fiction I have ever read at some point I forgot that I am reading a fan fiction and felt that I am reading a new magical novel that completely captivated me. It's very well written , the plot is amazing, the characters are unique and well fleshed out , the ending is incredible. This is a gem and I am very glad I found it and collected it as a treasured memory.

I am guessing that those numbers mean something offensive in the original language .

this novel is one of my favourites , the mystery , the suspense ,the thrilling adventures and complicated cases and most of all the slow but obvious main character growth , once I started reading it I couldn't put it down again .

so far it's a good start and it looks like it would be a good story , keep up the good work

(how come? ) or (what do you mean ?)

(but I didn't believe it was that much ) or ( but I didn't believe you were that talented) , either of those phrases would be better , good job though ur improvement r obvious 💪