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Up to chapter 34 Updating my last review, i got better, the mc seems a lot less shallow and the canon is non important at this point which is always appreciated. The one problem i think the author has is how to create a problem for the mc, him being so op, either a op villain or making this more a slice of life kind of story. Anyway, looking forward to how will this develop

aight

more like pobrecito está nervioso

aight, i'll keep reading it, i won't delete this tho, it was a good argument haha, hopefully i can do more reviews

sorry i said the dude not knowimg u are the author

the girls thing is something he said i believe in kings landing, i remember it cause is the only objective he had, getting laid cause he spent a lot of time in the lands between and couldn't do it there. about everything else... look it feels like all of the beginning serves no purpous in the story, he appeared then found robert almost dead... and let him die, then finds ned, knows that what he's going to do would lead him to his death... and lets him die, saves the 2 girls... and that's it, literally nothing happened, the dude could start 3 arcs in here, a befriend robert and save him, a help ned bring justice or something, and a help the starks in the war, but did nothing. It's like playing an rpg game, and do 3 prologue missions and abandon them at the first checkpoint, a waste of time, you get what i mean?

Until chapter 16 or so... Didn't like it. The writing quality is ok, not the best but not bad either, the pace is good too, not a boring moment where nothing is happening. The story combined with the main character which is the only oc so far are very bad, we are presented a mc that arrived to the seven kingdoms and is appearently crazy and numb to everything, he encounters key moments of got history from the beginning and does nothing about it except taking sansa and arya to winterfell, but that's not the reason this is bad in itself, it's because he does it for the lols, the mc acts with no rral reason whatsoever, no goals, no moral sense that makes him do things because he has to, he ain't bad either, he just does it saying he wants to have some fun or because he respects ned because of 2 lines of conversation they had. He also doesn't try to build any bonds with the people he interacted with, sansa and arya disappeared after they arrived to winterfell, robb had two interactions with him, one that was like talking to a wall masked with humor since we saw it from the mc perspective and another that was straight up insulting, but robb can't do shit cause mc is op of course. The only person he had an amicable interaction was greatjon and he left him like nothing, so not only the story is nonexistent, the mc comes and goes leaving nothing of substance behind to say "well at least this 16 chapters i read were worth my time". Hopefully later the mc becomes something more than i want to bang girls.

s'wit

the nords were granted with tha ability to use the thu'um by kyne with the condition of not using it to violence or conquest i believe, so the graybeard's philosophy shouldn't be wrong, the problem is that ulfric use it to kill torygg and nothing happened to him so maybe i'm wrong, the only one who is not bound to this is the dragonborn cause the power comes from akatosh

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