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BroMan987

BroMan987

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2017-10-31 加入United Kingdom
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  • BroMan987
    BroMan987a month ago
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    Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

  • BroMan987
    BroMan9872 months ago
    回復 The_Dark_Hydrax

    if you look up the name of the novel online, you'll be able to find the full complete version, seen it in quite a few places

  • BroMan987
    BroMan987a year ago
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    First of all, don't really care one way or the other about harems, but ignoring that, this novel suffers from a major problem that most does. The characters all decide the mc needs to change, does stupid ideas (e.g. the teacher claming somehow having people to rely on, makes you week, but its really an excuse for her to seduce the mc or manipulate him, don't really care). So the novel is good, but most of the characters are stupid/selfish, and the mc just goes along with it. If you tolerate or like that, then you'd probably enjoy it because the novel is pretty decent quality if rather unimaginative.

  • BroMan987
    BroMan987a year ago
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    This comment is going to be me summing up my thoughts when you brought up the fact the next few chapters are going to be triggering. I do not have the patience to wait and read through a bunch of chapters so the mc can learn some sort of lesson that I completely disagree with. You are a very skilled writer but your versions of these characters as well as your character's overall opinions on things, I find it extremely naive and I get the general vibe that you are seeing a lot of characters through a special kind of lens making them seem kinder than they actually are. Good luck but I don't wanna sit through another character arc where someone forces an opinion on the mc. Bye

  • BroMan987
    BroMan987a year ago
    回復 NotASpicyGermans

    I believe its the Russian censorship committee and he meant to say Roskomnazor, which is the nickname for it

  • BroMan987
    BroMan987a year ago
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    After a lot of Google searching, roskopozer is a reference to Roskomnazor, which is basically the people in charge of Russian censorship, I hope this helps even if I don't fully get why this is said