Slothiticus

what a transition from the ring to randomly im a reincarnated person

they can be built quick but rammed earth takes a lot of man power that without makes them take even longer than traditional methods and are very labor intensive

now this is how you use rammed earth

rammed is a very poor insulator it works much better as a thermal mass that absorbs warmth from sunlight through the day and radiates that warmth throughout the night but makes for a bad exterior wall in cold climates which is why they are often located as interior walls that get plenty of sunlight through the day via windows

Solid story especially for it being your first. while I would love to see some more world development and explanations dont force it just learn as you go cause it isn't to the point of making the story bad. The character is interesting and well developed with him facing emotional and mental challenges that the system can't help with. I would also work on imagery of the world as a whole and the monsters the character faces again not something you are doing bad but I think they could be more impact full to the reader if we can better feel what the mc is facing but that comes with time and experience so dont be overly concerned with it. overall you have a solid foundation but plenty of room to improve. I hope you keep up the good work.

pour that logic in

I love when mc has cheat system and is like im going to choose to not use it like an idiot. he can se the purity of pokeblocks so if he handmade them he could through trial and error make perfect ones that could greatly benefit his pokemon.

this is a lot of speculation as he is trapped on an island and knows barely any verified information

thanks for the chapter. it would be cool if he studied orcs to understand the the corruption that twisted them to see if it can be removed and accidentally created something like a house elf and because the magic that made them was removed they became smaller and dependent on the magic from a wizzard.

what if you made hints like wands combined with mithril blade much like a rapier as it would align with wand movements and created the first musketeers who were also spell blades combining martial discipline and spell casting