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Justgotshot

Justgotshot

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I Don't Want To Survive.... I WANT TO LIVE!!

2017-04-15 加入Global
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  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot5 days ago
    回復 Ivan_Rolswerth

    What do you mean by cycling?

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot5 days ago
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    Second! And what's with the chapters being pushed later and later. When I first started reading TMT, the first chapter was released on my way to work, 2nd chapter would be released before lunch, and the 3rd chapter would be released before I got off work. Not the first chapter doesn't even release before I go to bed, 2nd chapter released in the early morning, and the 3rd chapter gets released after I wake up. And I don't know if I'm missing chapters due to the shift in release schedules

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot2 months ago
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    It could easily be better is all I can say. I often times don't write reviews but the quality I have seen in this novel (at chapter 30) has compelled me to write this review. First. The grammer could be easily improved, there are times where it doesn't flow and it makes me wonder if this is a MTL of another novel. Correct the grammer and you would instantly see an increase in quality. Another area to improve upon is wording. I get what you're trying to say but the word choice throws it off. Combine it with the grammer mistakes and it makes you question if it was ever proof read. The story develops at a somewhat fast pace. A bit faster than I'd like to see but its nothing I haven't seen before. There are somethings that could have more screen time as they call it but this can be glossed over as trying to get into the meat of the story. The character design so far is ok imo. Could be more fleshed out but again this is a review at chapter 30 so take this with a grain of salt. updating stability, can't really comment on it as there are already 700 + chapters at the time of review. But updates seem stable if I look at how many ch/week. World building could be better as it kind of throws itself onto you as it appears. Would like to see it be better explained/fleshed out but that could be remedied at later chapter and I'm not there yet. This would easily get a higher score if the grammer and flow of the novel was fixed. I hope the author reads this review and implements the discussed topics in later chapter. And with this I'm clocking out

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot4 months ago
    回復 Assassinpi_314

    is that actually true or are you pulling my keg

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot4 months ago
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    What is up with the inconsistent upload schedule?

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot4 months ago
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    what has happened to the release schedule. its really wild now

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshot5 months ago
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    Does anyone know what happened to the release schedule? It used to be 9 am, 11 am and the 1 pm CST. Now idk

  • Justgotshot
    Justgotshota year ago
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    EITHER STAND ASIDE OR BE CRUSHED BY MY MIGHT