CultivatingJelly

No proper synopsis. You start reading thinking its gonna be 1 story only to suddenly have the mc being someone else. Gets a system but its sentient If the author started with this and didnt make the beginning of the novel confusing then it would be better, but now it just feels like ive been baited onto reading something worse. Dropped

Feels like someone with very little life experience wrote this book. So although the concept is interesting, its execution is just terrible. Feels more like an actual 5 year old kid got the demons memories and not a 500 year old demon in a 5 year olds body.

Only read if you are bored and enjoy slice of life with a weak mc who stays weak becauee he doesnt know how to use the cheats given to him. Too many time skips for no reason and there is zero progress during them. Too many explanations about everything, how is works, what is its overall impact on everything, but it has no effect on the story and 90% of the info given is obvious. Like bro why are you explaining what a storage ring is and the intricacies of how it functions 😅. I skiped most of the random explanations and yet still the story is very bland. The mc is supposedly getting points for affecting the story and he has an op cheat he can use said points to affect small things that could lead to insane outcomes, but he doesnt and instead im reading 5 chapters of explanations and him trying to look cool and mature while avoiding antagonizing anyone. 💀💀 im out

Wayy too much focus on peoples emotions in general. Also the auther cant go 2 paragraphs without mentioning how emotionless or cold the mc is. The more I read the more it feels like this was written by someone without much life experience. Story is too edgy for me im out 🙏

It is ok to read if ure super bored, but after a few chapters the translation is terrible, so i wont be reading more......................................................

Good concept, but too many useless details added along with pointless info dumps. The story doesnt flow smoothly and a lot of dialouges are annoyinf or forced. Too much focus on small irrelavant details.

m not gonna get into the details, but even simple doctors would be able to tell that arrows were not the cause of death

Typical dumb mc and even dumber ppl surrounding him. Plot and characters are 1 dimensional and there is no direction. ...................................

Too much teenage wish fulfillment and glossing over most things and interactions.

You guys need to chill, I never bother double checking any Authors math or workings coz even if it makes no sense you cant do anything about it so just ignore it and enjoy the read xdxd