bess

Terrible writing and a story that tells not shows. First girl is immediately r#ped, and that seems to be a theme. Not for me.

What an excellent story. And it's a mix of my favorite trope, rebirth, matched with my third favorite trope, VR Game dive. Definitely recommend and I'm absolutely adding this to my F5 List.

Top tier world building and story. Definitely going in my F5 list. Lots of complete world building and cool powers that follow the logic of the world without being too OP or inconsistent. Love it all!!

This novel is incredibly angsty and overall cringe. Especially the beginning. Hard to get through without endless secondhand embarrassment. Couldn't read past the first 15 chapters or so.

Always a fan of long-lived characters, but story needs a bit of polishing. Hope it gets better!

So far so great! Looking forward to more chapters!!

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