World Creators

Hello there if you're reading this I'd just like to ask the you give it the story a try its concept is interesting as I'm sure you've read already And while the grammer and English is rough showing support and helping with corrections is the best way to get the story to be as great as it can be and the author is still learning so definitely cut him some slack because he is willing and continues to improve Anyway I hope I see you in the comments Bye for now

Shameless author is here guys, please read this story. The story is about a man called Ryan who by mistake(now was it a mistake? hmm) download an app that changed his life.

This is a review of the first two chapters. The main character, Ryan, accidentally downloads a world building app during his class break. This fundamentally changes his life. The main character is flushed out and the reader gets a sense that he will react to changes emotionally. He also has a reasonable amount of suspension in new environments. He prefers to be inside his comfort zone. It will be interesting to see what happens to him after his world views are blown apart. The story can be improved by fixing spelling and grammar problems.

Great book! Great concept! I love that he creates a world l! There is only one problem...the update rate is ****ty....I'm an author myself and while I dropped one book I am writing another that's on hiatus because keyboard broke, as such I personally know that there should be a minimum chapters a week or at least every two weeks to keep the readers somewhat interested (I also know this because I read alooot) besides that it's a great story that has potential.

Yet another amazing concept utterly destroyed by a noob and casual writer. # What's the Plot? : As the name suggests, it's about a young man getting a cheat mobile app that allows him to create worlds. # Writing Quality : It's readable, but that's it. As I mentioned before, the author is a noob, and the story doesn't have a natural flow. It has a lot of unnecessary scenes, and you may find it difficult to read. # Stability of Updates : It's horrible as the author is a casual writer. # Story Development : I could not bring myself to read the whole thing, but the story seems to lack creativity. What I don't like is writers using the same old mythology without using their own imagination. I mean, two thousand years ago the average fantasy was angels- people with wings. But now you are living in an age where you are exposed to multiple cultures. So if you are going to use the same fantasy two thousand years ago, then it feels as if you have reached the limit of your imagination. I am too tired to type out the rest.

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