The Sin of Pride on the Straw Hat Ship (One Piece)

this is so poorly written sometimes is ridiculous I can't believe no one told you how poorly written this is I mean do you even have someone reading your stuff before you upload it nothing makes sense that you have written down

Where this novel come from. Please share sauce

This is written extremely badly not even names were left unharmed this is just completely wrong there is no China in one piece his name is Koby not Kirby I'm just leaving

劇透

I don’t know if this was translated from another fanfiction but you need to get someone to translate it better because it is very hard to read and so far I haven’t even seen a single mention of heat coming from The mc or even a mention of how he is weak a night