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The Rise of a Celestial

作者: TianXian
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Nader, a young man who had given all of himself to try to eradicate evil from the world, in order to bring happiness to all existence so that they could live in harmony and without worries, was branded a traitor by the countless beings he had once saved, and it was at that moment that everything came to an end. However... ------------------- This is a Fanfic. I have nothing except my MC. All other characters, including the worlds, belong to their respective original authors. The cover of the fanfic does not belong to me. If its creator wants me to remove it, I will gladly do so. ------------------ Hello everyone, I'm TianXian. I have written this Fanfiction especially to polish my writing. I want to clarify that English is my fourth language, so you will find quite a few mistakes when you read this fanfic. Also, I want to clarify that some of the characters that will appear will not have their original attitudes and personalities. Too, don't take this fanfic seriously. However, I will do my best to write and finish it. One last thing, the MC is pretty OP, so if you don't like these types of characters, this novel won't be for you. ------------------- First world: Arifureta. Second world: ??? Third world: ??? ???

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TianXian
TianXian作者TianXian

Please let me be shameless... Hello everyone! I'm going to write a few things before you read, so you don't regret it later XD. -First: there are a lot of errors both grammatical and pronoun errors -although I guess in the newer chapters, the constant pronoun errors decreased- if you don't want your eyes to bleed, don't read it XD. -Second: my narration is pretty boring, to say the least. I don't know if I'm bored because I'm the writer since I know what's going to happen -my limited and poor imagination doesn't help- F - Third: the dialogue is poor, so don't expect much. As someone who only utters about 100 words a day, I think this is obvious :'( - Fourth: did I already say this story is boring? Well... However, if you don't care about the above points and just want to hang out or have nothing to read, I think this is passable, or at least I'd like to think so XD. - This story contains harem, although I'm not good at romance -nor how to engage in a relationship- at least I'll do my best not to turn it into a Pokémon style haha. - Lastly, this does not contain N-t-r -sorry for those who like it, but honestly, for me, it sucks, and more so having experienced something similar in the past-. Well, to those who read this fanfic, I thank you. See you :3

Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4Emmanuel_Capricorn

I am looking forward to the story and I would say i have a decent time reading the 6 chapters....but I want you guys to know one thing... Its Chainese, Go figure..

LUCIFER_20
LUCIFER_20Lv4LUCIFER_20

The story is great, it gets updated everyday and the chapters have some plot instead of it being just fillers. Looking forward to how the story is gonna turn out.

InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5InfinityAndBeyond

You know when i read the word Celestial, the first thing that comes to my mind is One Piece.... yep those Celestial Dragons..... so i thought it would be Mc reincarnating as Celestial Dragon in One Piece and then story goes on.... it seems that it's not like that. But when i read it, it's good and satisfying 👍👍 Hello author-san, are you going to make the Mc go to One piece world?? and add Robin by the way

Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

I thought this was a Marvel fanfic hahaha. so far so good and the MC is cool, not naive and reasonable. good job hope the story continues 👍👍

naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3naraiz_ryhall

ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14ManasCiel

Is good. Worth giving it a try atleast. There are a fair bit of mistakes of him and her, he and she. But it is not that bad. Keep up the good work Author.

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1Diky_Maulana

Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka alur ceritanya.. MC tidak egois atau berkarakter seperti reinkarnator lainnya yang pada dasarnya mesum . Saya dukung karya tulis anda dan tetap semangat

Zeyziel
ZeyzielLv14Zeyziel

The story overall is good. Slight problem with misplacement of gender pronouns. Also, this maybe just me, the Author seems to be taking Yue down the Yandere route where in the original canon she's more of a big sister type, it gives me d unpleasant vibes reading her as d author has depicted her now

Kaniion
KaniionLv2Kaniion

It's a good story, the relationships so far are well done, even the harem isn't something that happens quickly. I'm curious to see what the other worlds will be like, but for now I'm really enjoying it.

Kisshot
KisshotLv6Kisshot

Writing Quality: Excellent, definitely above most fanfics on this site, it is amazing that English is the author's fourth language, i envy you!! Stability of Updates: One chapter per day so far, the length of each chapter is also adequate. Story Development: Personally this is the type of setting I like the most, this is a story where the MC doesn't know the plot of the worlds he travels to and doesn't have an annoying system. Character Design: The characters that have been shown and are relevant so far are being faithful enough to their original version, I would recommend a POV to follow up the characters that are not following the MC at that moment (Shizuku for example), which would help to develop her and the other students. (Although I'm sure you will do it in the next few chapters.) I have no other complaints, i would like to suggest you to develop those characters with great potential that were forgotten in their original stories, like Princess Liliana in the world of Arifureta. Keep up the great work author!

WintyLP
WintyLPLv1WintyLP

nice

xlvlx
xlvlxLv4xlvlx

Great start/potential. I hope the harem isn’t big nor small, arnd 5-8. Since the first world is Arifureta i hope he gets Yue as she is my fav and i recommend the following worlds (Naruto, OPM, DBZ, DxD, Tower Of God, Marvel) (Remia, Kaguya, Tatsumaki, Ophis) Oh yeh pls have Myu as adopted daughter PLS🥺❤️ Keep up the good work!

Devil023
Devil023Lv4Devil023

too boring

shiro_ngnl
shiro_ngnlLv2shiro_ngnl

good pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't dropgood pls don't drop

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