The Human system! Humanity's last hope.

It’s pretty good, although the mc is a little detached from empathy

First I would like to point out the near zero writing mistakes! Second I would like where the story is going so far and lastly mc may not be exactly how I like him but at least he not picking up every girl he see's because having more than 2 women is not right in any sense

Definitely has potential to become a great book its unique in its own right and you don't often see too many fanfics like this.............................

Tho writing quality isn't all that bad. Just needs some improvement. I suggest you use ai to check for spelling and grammatical mistakes to improve your work. and not write the story. If u for example put in your paragraph and it changes and tweaks it add improvements you'd think help and when u feel satisfied with the outcome I guess post it

[img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]