The Fox Goddess

yo, the book is quite fantastic, you did good on the character, and the background details are nice to, but what really got my attention was, DUN DA DA DAAA "the fox" books with foxes are my favorite. love you, love your book, and I can't wait for the next book or the next chapter

I'm sorry but the early chapters are in dire need of a rewrite. The quality is awful, the descriptions are simple, no punctuation, and grammar mistakes everywere. Reading ahead, the quality gets better. But as it stands, the early parts are way too painful to read.

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This is more of a question than a review. I read many novels on this app and I just cannot stand bad grammar.Im on chapter 5 and i wanna ask if the writing gets at least a little better cause if not, then im afraid i will have to drop this.(im not an english speaker myself so i understand some errors, i probably messed up something in my review as well, but just cant stand first chapters)

I read about 60 chapter, in the beginning its good, but the system explanation and the goddess part ruin it for me. The leveling part also not good, he cant get xp unless its stronger ruin it( she cant get xp from savage beast even tough she is a savage beast), also she is only savage beast but she can defeat essence lord( power scaling is off), no explanation about how normal beast advance?are they also have level?

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This is a very good book you should be very proud of it. There a couple of errors in it but nothing that will take away from the story. Therr is not a lot of fox store out there so please keep going. I hope it will be just like ”reincarnated as a fox with a system” and just as many chapters but please if you do drop this which I hope you don’t please tell us.

I don't know what to say I'm just tired of yuri if the male protagonist got reborn as female and wants girls instead of men I don't mind but the main protagonist is a girl should she at least have some kind of attraction toward men . I really like the main character she is strong , smart and merclic but why is she only attracted to women and I feel all men in this novel is incompetent, dumb and perverts only think about pretty girls even the king of the beast country is incompetent and weak I don't mind yuri but at least can't you add both men and female love.

Ok, I love it To the Library it goes!!!

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This story has a lot of interesting things in it and the way the story flows is just right I really love this story I hope you continue to right the story and update it till the end🙂 PS: Maraming salamat sa tuloytuloy na update 😊

I just got done reading the new chapter and it made me thing of this!!! I really love this book and hope it keeps going for a really really long tome!!! I would have hoped that the MC got at least 5-10 or more dragon egg if not more from this dragon so she can Frist of all make contracts with them all to be her familiars and then to let them grown up and have the MC train them and when I say train them.... I mean train them to protect her family and to fight in battles... Like let them have armor on them especially in battles so they can help keep the Small fries off the MC and they can alway be watching over her daughters and wifes and they can always be around just incase they r in trouble!!! By the MC having so maybe dragons they will be able to have squads of 5 and take turns roaming around her property to make sure her family is safe and no threat to coming towards her house or land.... Like 1 squad flys around and make sure everything is secure and safe and everything for half the day then the other five take over and do the exact same thing the first five did!!! And with so many dragons under the MCs command the dragons she has can control the other dragons and wyverns and make them fall into line and the MC should be able to get the 5-10 or more dragons she made contracts with something out of the system to help them be bigger and stronger so this way no other dragon can fight them off or dominate them and id there r dragons that dont want to fall into place then have the MC go there and beat the holy hell out of them so they understand they r not the biggest and baddest anymore and they r not as strong as they think they r and even let the MC get the skill from the system so dragons can adjust their size so this way they can stay small and always be around the MC and the house fly around her send be on her shoulder or in the backyard or something and they wouldn't be that noticeable unlike there full sizes!!! And honestly the MC should look for the most ferocious beast on land so if the dragons r having a problem in getting into small places or r getting attacked from the air then they have the graound beast to help out!!!! I hope this happens when they go back to there home and even have a couple beasts or something where they r now roam her property when she is away to protect her wifes and daughters!!!! I really really hope u the author put this in the book!!!!

I juzt got done reading chapter 676 and I have to say this book is still as awesome as ever!!! There r still a couple things that I think the MC should do and I put them in the comments in this newest chapter!!! So I hope the Author looks at them and reads them and puts them in the book!!! I honestly think it would be awesome if the things get added better it would definitely help her especially with safty.... lol So please AUTHOR take a look and let me know what u think!!! But regardless on what comments I have in the newest chapter this book is still awesome amd I hope u keep going with it and hope that u can add at least 1or2 more chapters a week if possible please!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ON THIS BOOK!!!!

I just got done reading chapter 637 and this book is still really really good!! I still cant get enough of it!! But I had an idea that I hope would work in this part.... So if MC takes this test can she skip levels/ranks in the guild and not have to start at the bottom!!??? Because honestly that would be kinda stupid if she has to start at level/rank 1 at the bottom considering how strong she is already!! The MC will be able to take on better missions and make a bigger name for herself fast especially if she takes on some jobs that other wont because they r to scared to do it and its to dangerous!!! And y not have the MC start a war or have her participate in a lot of beast riots so the MC can rack up all the points she needs for her next rank/evolution and if she fights and kills people and monsters that r higher level then she will get more points then just the lower ones and she is looking to get as strong as possible the fastest!!

I know it's your choice author to write what you like in the book but can please add normal romance I would love the main protagonist have both boyfriend and girlfriend.[img=update]

This is still a fantastic book to read Im glad ur keeping it going... and I was just wondering if ur looking at the messages on the chapters and taking them into consideration??

This is a great novel. It's definitely worth reading. I hope the author continues the book. Will be a shame if left half done.

although the first hundred or so chapters have quite a few dialogue and grammar issues, these are cleared up after that point. the story is decently compelling, with some minor confusion occasionally happening during certain sections. while it is a nice Yuri romance story, it is also a Harem yuri story, which is NOT denoted in the tags, I hope this is fixed in the near future. after the first, and partially including the second, the romantic interests seem forced and sloppy. shoehorned in a bit. power scaling ramps up faster than you can blink in certain sections, but this aspect can be kinda fun. all in all, if not for the sudden harem development, I'd follow this story to its conclusion.

This book is awesome. It hasnt disappointed me at all. I cant wait to see what the author does to give the MC more powers and maybe more elements to use. But the biggest thing is that if you comment at tue end of the chapter and its relevant then the author will take ot into consideration with I think is one 9f the best things in an author because it shows they care and r trying there best to incorporate what u say to make the story better. keep up the great work!!!