The Dragon of MHA

Wassup, I figured it was time to write a new review, since when I last wrote it, I had like 10 chapters. I decided to do this for fun and it is my first novel so the first chapters have plot holes, random things and a bunch of other things that I don't even remember. Once you reach chapter 15, the chapters start getting consistently longer(and in my opinion better) until they average 2k+ words. The more I write, the better I get, and I have no intention of dropping this up until the anime ends As of now, MHA seasons 5 just started airing so I will adapt S 5 of the anime. Whether or not I adapt the manga will depend on various factors as well as my other Novel, MHA: Bungee Gum. May disappoint a few, but no harem. Anyways that's it from me, enjoy the read. Your shameless author, Chopstiksman

MC comes off as an idiot and he is supposed to have the abilities of natsu dragneel not some naruto jutsu knockoffs its dumb. Once the author started to add clones and just recreate other things from naruto it became bad

It was supposed to be natsu but aside from the fire dragon b.s. moves he has naruto knockoff abilities.. fire clones trying rasenshuriken fake chakra where he uses fire to boost his blood? Wtf? Personality is bland mc is an idiot who thinks he's cunning... hiding his real strength for some reason?

And this where I drop this. Why does every authur want to show of there massive ***** to midoriya. We get it. You have power that was A given to to you just like midoriya. And b born with it. Not only was midoriya, bullied and quirkless, but he only recently gained his quirk unlike everyone else. So not only is the Mc stupid but he also dosent care to think. Of course he's whiney and a bit cringe at the start. But his charachter improves. As for the mc who has lived two lives. His charachter dosent even have seemed to have matured.

Kind of astonishing how this story has an overall rating of 4 stars... There's literally no world-building, and characters have no more to them than their names. The story is all over the place. The grammar is fine... but the writer doesn't seem to know what a POV is, since he switches between 1st and 3rd person at the drop of a hat. There's also hate towards the main cast of MHA that I don't understand... If the MC was supposed to have read/watched the series then how come he seems to despise everyone? That really was very out there, with no good reason to be, from what I can see. Hating Bakugo is a normal thing, we already kind of expect that, because he is indeed an ass, but everyone else... what's your reasoning? I honestly want to know it... If only you worked more on describing characters and locations, my review could've been 3 stars, I can't give more than 1 when what we know was told to us by someone else (the author) and not you. Story development, at the start, gives us a very big clue on what you'll do in later chapters too. Gigantic time-skips out of nowhere that you could've used as training time instead, and maybe even to develop relationships (which in hindsight probably wouldn't happen anyway, since MC seems to hate everyone).

what's the point of the mc getting natsu's power if it's just a cheap imatation 1)he still gets the dragon slayer magic motion sickness weakness and he doesn't even have dragon slayer magic it's just his quirk is similar to natsu but pales in comparison 2) he literally just said his father had a lizard quirk and due to mutation he got a dragon or should I say lizard with wings quirk 3) everything is just shallow like it went from being in the orphanage straight to ua exam which way to fast 4) if he has a fire and lizard quirk where's his quirk for the end power that was basically keeping natsu from disappearing

no plot the whole thing is a copy and its no even good and mc if pretty week i mean it would be intresting if he could turn into a dragon and natsu in fairytail doesn't even have to ply with thoe kids he will easily beat them you are a waste if feel bad for the powers dissrespect on natsu´s name this whole fanfictions is trash and sus

Lesson learned, read or at least check reviews before reading. Not only did I get a dropkick to the face after reaching 20+ chaps, but I also wasted my time.

It's a good story. The development, character design and his background are good. A little bit more focus on the background of Natsu could be very useful as it'll help understand his personality a bit better.

I liked the start of it up to the sports festival. Then you add a different character from Fairy Tail. That's not okay for me as this is not a crossover fanfic. Well I just didn't like twist like that. Thanks and good luck I guess.

I have always wanted this exact thing natsu in mha and now it's here it does have its rough patches but I am excited to see where it heads .

Don't let the chapter count and nice text format fool you, this story is poorly written. It is without any character depth or world building. The main character is at best contradictory and at worst a dimwit. The story feels like its written by someone with the intelligence of a 10 year old and the vocabulary of a 12 year old. Seldomely do I write negative reviews, but I feel cheated and deceived by how polished it looked, despite being rough and dull.

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Nice Story. I hope you let him have some kind of E.N.D mode that is on Acnologia Level. Like teased in the Manga/Anime and not the weak ass mode where Natsu fought on the same level as Gray.

I like it especially the part where he loses his headband and you made it so he didn’t just destroy them. Made it more suspenseful and thrilling. Kinda curious who your gonna have his waifu be or if he is gonna have any. I recommend doing the invisible girl mainly cause I don’t think I’ve seen any where she is the waifu mainly mono with I like she is my second after midnight or you could go with midnight make it interesting.

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It seems like this fanfic is a translation, but it really isn't. It's very similar to those Chinese works where you just turn off your brain and read.

it's not that bad really. it's just too cringy and I honestly expected more. :<

Cringe

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