The Curse Of Wardoks

Truth be told, I don't give any novel a 5, especially if it's from the first chapter. But my god. This one just captures you in, I have never seen such a well-written grammar and story-wise first chapter like this. Dialogue, description and even the characters that we didn't even get to know are all amazing. My one and only complaint about this beautifully crafted story from the first chapter is that it only had one chapter. I seriously need more.

Hello, this is me the author giving myself a shameful 5 stars rating. Well, you know what they say, if you don't 5star your novel, how do you expect people to 5star it for you? Anyway, this is no time for jokes! I want to tell you all that my novel The Curse Of Wardoks has been nominated as the winner of the Silver Tiers of the WPC#118. Thanks to all of you! And this means that I have been offered to sign a contract with Webnovel. After a long time of thinking, I think I'm going to see it through, I'm just working on a new cover and some other novel stuff. I wish that this novel makes it to the top, I've been working on it for quite sometimes, and I have high hope for it. If you Sir, the one reading this review, still haven't read my novel, then what are you waiting for? If you did, I wish that you support me if you had enjoyed it. Creation is hard! So keep me going ^^ Thanks to everyone who read the novel so far!

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I really loved this story, minus the fact that there aren't more chapters anyways. It felt like I was being pulled into the world. beautiful writing skills and an amazing plot.

This book is a gem. I fell in love with it one the first read. Your writing skills are amazing and the story is just mindblowing. The quality of writing is brilliant. It is evident how much effort the author has put into creating the story and the characters. Eager to see how the story proceeds. An awesome book and definitely a must-read. Keep up the good work author.

I like the development of the series and events in the story, besides the of way of writing makes it very easy and amusing to read. Nice Work!

I'm loving this, especially the intro... Really got me with 'the end'. I also love how the story develops too. And am sure I'll love the MC. Good stuff!

The very first novel I ever read here, and OMG it was so good! I don't have any experience in writing, but I can tell that this is a fantasitic novel! update the next chapters please!

Wow what a powerful beginning! ❤️ The mystery of the deaths of 13 million people only in 20 mins is enough to hook the readers to want more. Even though it's only 3 chapters, this story has a lot of potential. Writing quality is very good 👍 I ask other readers too to do give it a try. Keep it up Author!

There are only a few chapters out but its got so much potential and draws you in immediately! Even just from the beginning of the first chapter we get the atmosphere of the story and the world we are in and it hooked me immediately. Although, I do have to say that it lost me halfway in the first chapter because the dialogue felt expositional and some of the things the author couldve benefited from showing through actions or slowly revealing throughout the story to keep the reader tense. The writing style is very good and I especially like how every chapter starts. Tho just another small thing, I think it'd be better if author checks the punctuations and doesnt forget to capitalise after a full stop. Anyways very great story!! Love it!!

First the flaws, and then the good stuff. Your writing style isn't very descriptive. Most of the scenes are either action or dialogue oriented. This makes it a bit difficult to tell what's going on. This can work if executed well, but I think a bit of well written exposition would serve your story well. Most of your grammar is fine, but there are some places where I can't even tell what you're trying to say. The story itself is captivating. Each chapter was a complete 360 in tone. The narrative drives forward really quite well, and I think the the overused "aliens who have come to take over the earth" trope is actually done quite well here. Kudos!

DROP THE NEXT CHAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (thats all I had to say but there's a min of 140 chars UGH who came up with this rule people)

Nothing can describe it better than Peerfect. I love it . it's so AMAZIIIING! Can't wait for the next chapters, keep up the great work . ^_^

Good beginning,the end is the beginning,I can tell its a nice story.Hope to read more of it,the grammar is superb,keep up author waiting to see how the story unfolds.

Wow! I have to commend the author. Good job on the narrative. It made me compel to consume quickly the two available chapters. Will wait for your next update and excited to know what will happen next. :)

Interesting premise!! I really want to know what happens next. I especially liked the build-up of the first chapter. I think the dialogue could flow better. It was a little choppy and strange, and a bit too plot convenient. The men suddenly start making these radiation conjectures out of nowhere. Maybe you can lead up to it (such as, why did they think it was radiation? How do the corpses look like? Did they do a study on it? Evidence? etc). I hope this review helps you out a little! Good job!

Well, one chapter, and I'm already hooked! The inspector's characteristic is amazing and profoundly described. So far, there is one chapter so I have yet to grasp for the Story Development. Keep up the good work author! More chapters, please... As for spelling, I haven't noticed any errors and the paragraphs seem to have the perfect fit. Anyways, keep it up author!!!

I can only say one thing... Where are the other chapters??! Let me in! Let me iiiinnnnnnn!!! Jokes aside, this novel has a very interesting plot and seemed-to-be worldbuilding. I immediately got hooked on the mystery and that painful cliffhanger on the first chapter is already more than enough to make me want to know more. You excelled on the thriller and it was good enough to make me go to the edge of my seat. Other than some gramatical errors, I can't see any problem on the quality of the writing. I'm looking forward to more chapters!

So this is a fictionnal story that includes realistic characters, a well-paced plot, very well written dialogues and tons of suspense. It succeeded to hold my interest through the whole chapters, and I'm waiting for more.

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