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Tale of Discovery

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A person wakes up on a certain day, his memories regarding the past all lost - an enigma to be realised. Fortunately, it doesn't seem like it would take him long to do so, as a mystical individual appears and leads him to the beginning of a path filled with mysteries. On this path, he continues to unveil more and more of his forgotten past. Alas, his path is that of an individual that lacks morality and virtue, acquiring what he seeks through any means available and overcoming all who stand in his way. Warning: This fan-fiction has an actual plot. Discord: https://discord.gg/7grhN98 --------- Please read "What to Expect" before the first chapter. This fanfic includes characters/world from (so far): Rift/Undesignated: -|- Yosuga no Sora: In Solitude Where We Are Least Alone {World/Characs} -|- Highschool DxD {World/Characs} -|- Campione {Characs} -|- Akame ga Kill {World(?)/Characs} -|- Mirai Nikki (Future Diary) {Characs} -|- Fate {Characs} Platforms: -|-Charlotte {World/Characs} -|- Owari no Seraph (Seraph of the end) {Characs} -|-Zero no Tsukaima (Familiar of Zero) {World/Characs} -|- Beatless {World(?)/Characs} -|-Sora no Otoshimono (Heaven's Lost Property) {World(?)/Characs} -|-Date a Live {World/Characs} -|-Overlord {World/Characs} -|- Goblin Slayer {Characs} -|- Arifureta {Characs}

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Creator
2 :Life in the Rift
3 :Lost
4 :Unmatched
5 :First Game

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Photosphere
PhotosphereLv14

I've been reading this one for a while and noticed that it doesn't have the appreciation that it deserves, I guess everything is Marketing at the end of the Day, this fanfic reminds me of 'God succession System' in regards that they're not placed in the ranking they should, I don't dare say they're top 5 but definitely top 15. Writing Quality: Little to none grammar mistakes and great use of synonymous. Story Development: Also great, not loyal to the original stories contained in it, which makes it way better, also the new layout made by the author is not some crazy thing, it is a story that somehow makes sense, even tho everything hasn't been revealed yet. Character Design: Very well done, definitely each character has their own personality, you will find every dere in existence in this fanfic I think and they're in the harem too because yes, this is a Harem novel. World Background: I guess this is where this novel highlights the most, great Nanuverse-type system the author made here, I shall explain better further down. Now my personal opinion *Spoiler Alert* I don't like two things about this novel, everything else is perfect: 1.- It is a little too confusing at the beginning, don't know if I'm the only one but usually unless the story got me hooked up too much I don't read every single word of the paragraph but jump between sentences and I use my logic to comprehend them, thus reading faster, in this one I began and read every single one of the first two chapters and still didn't understood fk all xD dropped it in the list for a few months until I was bored with nothing to do and gave it a chance, after understanding the 'system' the author did, I like it now. 2.- The author is a fking lolicon... As if... Diehard lolicon... Been tempted to call FBI a couple of times already to get his ass jailed. As of now, there's only 2 'official' Harem members: Tiamat and Gabriel. Other milfs have been introduced but it hasn't gone further than a few kisses, he even gives them 'time' to settle their feelings before going all the way with them. But when it comes to lolis, fk it all, take them straight away. So far he has only gone all the way with Tiamat. Come on bro, I'm not saying leave the lolis but what is this Bias? I'll now make a simple guide of the terms I somehow understand: - Rift: It is the main world MC belongs to, a mix between DxD and Yosuga no Sora (maybe some others too). - Mete: I don't know WTF this is (it's like a place between the rift and the platforms where the transportation between worlds takes place? Not very sure) - Codes: Characters with special abilities that allow them to travel between platforms (worlds), they have a power ranking - Unknowns: Characters or entities that come from outside a specific world. - Platform: Is the different worlds there are, rather than call them (anime worlds) author prefered to call them [platforms] to make it more realist and not look like MC is some otaku travelling through the multiverse. Now the things that I like: 1.- Except for DxD, the worlds chosen aren't cliche: Owari no Seraph and Zero no Tsukaima as of now. 2.- MC doesn't know anything about the worlds he goes to, that makes the story more interesting and tense, rather than have an MC that knows everything that's going to fking happen, I prefer when he doesn't know anything. 3.- Relationships are developed with time and there's no Japanese blush-blush-evade bullshit if you know what I mean things are rather straight, MC and girl interact and they fall for each other making slow process every so often. 4.- I like the original way the author made his novel work, even tho there are still things I don't understand and that's because they haven't been revealed yet, everything becomes very entertaining once you understand the concepts that he introduces. 5.- MC is very OP but he delegates work, he has partners and an entourage and they help him if needed. Last but not least, sometimes the fights are confusing because there isn't a proper grasp of the enemies and MC strength, he's said to be OP enough to destroy cities in seconds but then you see him struggling to kill some ants sometimes, so you don't really know if either he's weak or the ant is not an ant, either way, it is not good to boast so much of his strength and title, if he's gonna be beaten the crap out of him just to come out on top at last. Greetings.

SwirlOfTheRoot
SwirlOfTheRootLv4

Now before anything, i wanna make this clear: It's been a while since I've started reading this and i noticed that very few people seem to express their appreciation, really unfortunate, especially when some 'authors' like ghostyz and akikan who write stuff out of their buttholes still get that much popularity and interaction, it is concerning... Anyway, The story is one of the few fanfictions on this platform that I really enjoyed reading and actually liked the main character who the story revolves around. Now, if you're still in the early chapters, you'll probably think that I'm smoking something to write such a review, but no, it really does improve and everything is properly explained, don't be like me who let this hidden gem rot in his collection because of judging too fast... While the story might start confusing and be a bit annoying sometimes at first because of the main character being too carefree for his own good and how he ignored a few obvious hints, it's explained why such thing would even happen and it's also solved after the end of Charlotte's arc. You'll be given the information required to deduce the reasoning, so you only need a brain to figure it out and then you'll really like the main character starting from that point because everything takes a different turn from the 2nd arc, which is High School DxD with Crossovers, and there's a plot! It's not that Exalf(Author) just put everything in a mixer then said "nah, **** it, imma make a wish fulfillment novel" and produced some kind of trashy shit as a result, but there's an actual plot, a goal, and the novel seems to have so much thought and mental power invested in it, yet you still won't find a "Huge Pa treon Deal" suddenly popping up like a boogie-man and targeting your ass-hole. Now, all of that aside: -Writing Quality: There's almost no grammatical errors and you can actually read it without getting your brain fried trying to figure out what the **** everything means...so you'll be using that spare mental energy for figuring out the plot and trying to predict the upcoming events using the hints dropped in each chapter... -Story Development: It really has great development, like, you'll finally find that it has a plot of its own and isn't just following the original canon, yeah not exactly what happened in the early chapters ofbCharlotte because the changes and improvements were in the latter stages of the arc, but the following arcs are really great, [Btw, Minor Spoiler Incoming...] especially DxD with the crossovers or more accurately, 'The Rift'. There was a plan followed, and it was really great, not just rereading the canon all over again like how most 'authors' of DxD fanfictions do... -Character Design: I think I've praised the main character previously, so let me explain why, well, the main character's alignment is chaotic neutral, if you're not familiar with the alignment system, then in simpler terms, chaotic neutral means "i do what i want, but i have a bottom line", the bottom line isn't the laws but his personal morals, sanity and needs. So you should expect a bold main character who knows what he wants, not a xianxia retard who'll commit a genocide because someone made eye contact with him nor a japanese little boi who'll blush left and right every single second, be 'clueless' about the girls' affection or act like a 'beta-bitch' as they call it here... Speaking of the harem, now...take a deep breath...the author is....a certified lolicon...just like mys—now hold on and let me explain, it's all legal work... But seriously, the harem mostly consists of legal and ancient 'lolis' such as Koneko and Ophis, however that doesn't mean that there are no other types, as along the story, the harem gets to include at least one or more of each type and the balance starts to appears, so not only lolis, there are milfs, yanderes, sane-tsunderes, kuuderes, danderea, and there's even around five sisters/step-sisters till now...though unfortunately, it's not literally Wincest in 'essence' but i won't explain why because that would be considered as spoilers and i won't spoil for obvious reasons... So as I was saying, you'll definitely be satisfied and might even get sweetness-diabetes from the cuteness of the lolis—now put that phone down and don't call the fbi, there's only legal/ancient lolis here... -Updating Stability: Consistently one chapter a day to keep your boredom away, though only till you finish it and the 'hunger for more' phenomenon occurs... And finally, -World-Background: Like i said many times, there's a plot, there's a plan, there's gold, everything is nice and cool. The complementary world building is great and there's world-travel not world-jumping, hope you know the difference... So anyway, go and read it, survive the early chapters, and then everything will prove its greatness and worth to you. The novel may not be from the greatest three of all-time, but it certainly is the top ten in my humble opinion. Also, don't forget to leave a review and some comments here and there to make the author feel that it's worth the effort because he doesn't really get any materialistic win out of this, such thing is very very rare these days...Now Go!

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