STORY 9 ( DROPPED)

The Montesinos are in dissaray. It's been months after the fight and Maria, the heir to the house and all relations still haven't come back. But after a stormy night, he knocks on the family door. Covered in blood, his tattered skirt filled with bullet holes and inconsistencies in who he used to be and who he is now. There's only one question from Boris, " Maria, what happened to you?." I hate doing this to myself but I'm rewriting the x-25 story AGAIN. This was version 2 so ima just post what I have of this ( 6 chapters over the next few days) while I work on the next. Feedback would be nice but what's even nicer is a quick comment telling me to go fuck myself. Hate you too.