Sovereign of the Firmaments

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Cool concept for a Mc distrust of organisations due to past life. Mc was a very skilled assassin loner orphan betrayed by organisation that raised and trained him, almost survived.... The Mc heart starts to thaw when the hosts body he transmigration to is the elder brother of an pair of siblings, their family that has been slaughtered and he's the Mc is saved by his younger brother. The Mc accept his new life and family, triggering the system which he distrust as to him he feels its like the previous organisation issuing missions etc.... interesting concept, wanting to control his own life destiny not be dictated but missions from the organisation system. The writing style is clean and gets u attached to the characters. There is a few minor grammar issues once in a while could be predictive text. but easy to work out. Very enjoyable keep up the good work.

All around a great read so far and I’m definitely looking forward to being able to read more in the future. Also I have to say I just love the little brother, he’s so cute

It's not a terrible novel nor is this novel anything exciting. Just an average novel that is strong with the Cringe and the Tropes. Would recommend this to those who are killing time waiting for the better novels to update. Anyway I thought this would be good, I'm going back to New Age of Summoners

Like New Age of Summoners not much is wrong with the book... The book upadate and the story progress is very constant... Just that the book is nothing spectacular it hovers around the above average category... One of those books to read when there is nothing to read and you have sometime to kill...

what does firmaments mean? Well it doesn't matter . I really don't like chapter 14. Does it need to be chapter to notice us? I don't understand world setting. I like story development happening. Since when did assassination became legal to have them only keeping eyes on them. Assassination means killing in secret. It doesn't seem like assassination guild. I like character when he is going to succumb to system for missions . Ha Ha Ha Ha ha Ha Ha Ha [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

sigh, stupid immature arogant talkative protagonist and what he doesn't want to complete missions because of his 'reason'. and don't tell me to wait for character development he's literally living his second life even if he isn't perfect he should be mature enough. And he is a freaking assassin he should do things in the dark yet he confront them face to face and talk nonstop

Based on the story so far it seams like it will be great, the Mc has reasonable dislike of organisations and so far hasn't just immediately grown overpowered because of the system he got and while he has to start with very little it's not like he started with absolutely nothing like some of the stories I've read

So far this book is great! I love the character design and the way he thinks. It is a great thing to relate to a main character and really brings you into their world. Evan though might be a bit of an issue with how sheltered he is but he is still young.

Hello everyone So far the story is really captivating And interesting For someone That really like stories with a system and missions that makes the character grow this story is already getting Better and as tge chapters keep on coming I’m Sure that the story will have all kinds of plot twists and possibly a few near death experiences.

I like the story so far I hope author breaks the hiatus.

What I love about this novel is the interaction between MC and Heaven, unlike other fantasy novels were MC is trying to kill Heaven for reason unknown

hey there. I'm not sure if it's just the first chapters, the translation or whatsoever but the amount of gold is driving me crazy. he started with a certain amount but despite that he keeps spending a luxury amount even not having much revenue. It's really frustrating the math doesn't match lol 😆 also this system is too unrealistic, I mean, you should at least set a certain amount of rules how stuff works and not poping up out of blue. nevertheless, Im enjoying the development, I'm used to skipping a lot of paragraphs in novels because of fillers and how authors often keeps slowly explaining and repeating and keeping the reader busy just to make some chapters. Wich is common and I don't blame bc I'd definitely do the same but it sucks nonetheless. anyway, your writing skills are clean and fine without regressive thoughts and it's really cool read such a novel despite the stuff I said.

your work is very good well written nice story background. . I enjoy reading your novels they are very nice just like your other 2 novels ... I really hope you can keep updating them I'm so addicted to it [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

This story is very intriguing, i love stories with systems, and this one is off to a great start, I like the concept and the mc, I can see the effort placed into the story, it is well written and deserves its five stars. Keep up the good work

I really like the idea and think the personality of the protagonist is a good match. It's well written and I can see the effort put that's been put in this book. I am looking forward to what comes next, as there have only been a couple of chapters so far. But I'm confident it will bring many enjoyable adventures

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I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books. Some people say you are a bookworm because you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.

I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.

..................excellent novel ............................. i strongly recommend to read this novel simply superb. the way MC is portrayed is so awesome