She Becomes the Hero in Another World

This Is From The One Who Fell Off A Cliff Of Love For Kotoura! The Talented Author With Innurable Fans Across The Globe Shiro; This Is this Author's First Novel in this Site, Don't hesitate to read up & suck up to this story with your stars & stones! It's worth the read both for those who wish for adventure & the stars that will light up your day! The characters will be those who you will cherish and crack your frozen heart to fall in deep love again & again. Open your eyes! You will never regret being tortured in hell with your sin of Lust for embracing this novel!

It’s an really interesting story. I really enjoyed what’s been written so far and can’t wait for more updates. Please keep up the hard work and thank you for sharing the story.

I love the lighthearted feel and Robin is a fun one. Descriptions are a bit short, just a little bit off from painting the whole picture in my head. I'm sure it gets better the further it goes. All in all, I am having a good time reading this novel.

This novel has a strong start with a solid premise and no info dump stat systems or status screens. That being said, the novelty of its plot plateaus after a certain point due to overexploited, pointless and bland plot devices such as; misunderstanding common human interactions, genderbending, and ignorance. The above-stated plot devices are often thrown around with little to no thought put into their execution. This gives the novel a sort of "flavor of the month" type feel to its dialog and pacing. Often times you'll find characters that are supposedly in their 20's making the same mistakes a small child of 8 or 9 would make. Characters with both low IQ and low EQ are not entertaining to read about, hence my assumption that this novel marketed towards a more younger audience range. If the above plot devices are intended then the writing quality is amazing and it has gone above and beyond its status as an original novel, if they are not intended then I would recommend resolving some the issues associated with their use. I enjoyed the design of the main character, she's fresh and clean and she feels a lot like Velma from scooby doo. That being said, the other characters are rather stale and 2-D in comparison. This isn't helped by how often plot devices are used to make them look like idiots. As far as world-building, I think some work could go into it to make it really pop, but considering the overall childish feel of this novel, perhaps that might be too much. In short, this is a great kids novel!

I really recommend this novel. I've had read only 30 chapters, but I think that the amount is enough to say with a 99,9% certainity that this is a really, REALLY GOOD READ. Setting aside the fact that the plot is a gust of fresh air, I must say that our heroine is higly credible. She does what she can do, and ask for help when the situation needs it. She's overpowered, but not in a bad sense; besides, she didn't have to worry about political schemes so far. The other personages are unique and easygoing. This is currently a lighthearted novel, with specs of sílice of life (i hope muy life were like this) and comedy. The better? IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL, AND A GREAT AUTHOR THAT CAN MAKE IT SHINE Finally, the updates aren't fast nor slow. But since this is so good, the wait feels like torture and it worth it.

I stumbled across this story and have found it to be enjoyable to read. It has comedy and some seriousness. The characters are fun and have good development and growth. This is a hidden jem.

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It is good and interesting novel that is fun to read because of the mc attitude to most of the things so I would say give it a try and you might fall into the novel

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A good plot with a refreshing premise but a bit vanilla so you should stick with it to see how the novel progress and grows in complexity. All in all not a bad read but it may not be for everybody.

I've only just started reading this and I'm already in love! It's absolutely fantastic and I can't wait to see where the story goes. I definitely suggest reading this if you like an mc that's likeable and funny.

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