SECOND LIFE, AN IDOL.

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Well it's a good novel but there aren't many chapters and it's annoying However, I think it is a novel that deserves support and is truly an amazing novel

Really good so far. Well done author! Keep writing and keep posting. Don't give up. Will be waiting for you to post more chapters! Keep up the good work!

It's a good story plot and it's quite interesting. The mc have a great character development. There are some spelling errors and grammatical errors, might want to fix it. Try to use brackets like ( ) or [ ] for the system mission or status plate so they don't mess up with some paragraphs. Label the conversation on who's talking so they know who's talking with the mc for example " are you okay honey?" - Ace's mom. Sorry if you find it quite offending author

A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.

It's a great . I love the story and the development of events. And the character of the hero is also very cool ~~~. But I have advice, what if you use these signs, for example, “...” for the sayings of people and also for the hero, and another one for the system, such as (...) so that things do not confuse us

So, story could use some editing, not to mention more depth to the background and details, but... I do see potential. I like the idea you have and with improvement this can become an awesome story~! Good luck writing, author!

Cuando empecé a leer esta historia realmente me gustó mucho, siento que es muy entretenida y es fácil de entender. Encuentro está novela como una obra que cumple mis estándares, aunque claro le encuentro una que otra falla como lo sería el tiempo de actualización, pero respecto a todo lo demás es de mi gusto y espero que el autor siga actualizando más seguidamente. (⁠ﾉ⁠◕⁠ヮ⁠◕⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠*⁠.⁠✧

I really enjoy the story, and i can't wait to read more, i hope that the author can update as son as posible and things goes well for him/her.

i hate the story because i abhor the system that author made, stupid story should have been really good story if it weren't for the typical hateful system attitude and characters, overall score - meh

A história é muito interessante e envolvente. Personagem bem escrito com uma personalidade forte e definida. É sempre divertido ver as interações com o sistema

I love this so much the pacing and the character development is amazing and very well thought out by the author! I’ll be watching out for new chapters amazing work author!

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Me encanta es muy entretenido para mí y me lo leí rápido espero que pueda subir capítulos más rápido 🙏🙏 claro si tienes inspiración, por el momento me está gustando como se está desarrollando la trama. Te quiero autor

The story has a very interesting start, nothing too special yet, but everything is good so far. More chapters are needed to determine if the story will great or just good.

I like the overall story, the characters, and setting. Its kind of confusing who's talking cuz of quotation and also the chapter was short, which kind of pity cuz i was investing reading what's next. Overall its good story worth reading! keep up the good work Author!👍🏻

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Very interesting. From the plot to the characters to the background and even how it is written. All well done. Pulling the readers in for a fun ride. From Review swap.