Rise of Yahunyens: Origin

Hello there! I am new to webnovel, I found this novel by random searches but I gotta say, this is freaking good! Idk why it doesn't have any readers yet but this is a sick book. From now itself the characters are so good, I have no idea how better they'll become in the future. The story of the Skaar Gods is fucking good and Sivera's detailed backstory too!! It's called skywings I guess. Then the best part for me was when i read it till ch 33, In stories there are usually those elements like fire, lightning, earth wind stuff, but here it is something different along that, there was freaking "Sun Commanding!!" that was totally epic and sick. I was reading this other book called Affinity chaos, from there i remember this fire, lightning elemental stuff, but here I found something different, so liked it!

If you guys wondering that I am using AI for writing this story then you aren't wrong. But, each and every idea, concepts, creativity, characters, plot, story developments, dialogues and direction are my own including the minor details like slow motion, dance of blood, etc. I am using AI just for language improvement and better usage of words to enhance the story. Just for better presentation. But I am not solely depended on AI. Instead sometimes I edit what AI has written, lol. In between there are many paragraphs written by me and not AI and this story is a blend of human creativity along the usage of AI to enhance the outcome and present a story for the new era. Conclusion: Language improvement by AI but story is not written by AI !! I said this now itself before people begin to criticize saying the story is written by AI and I got no creativity when the truth is I only improve the language and second reason, honesty is the best policy, :) I myself say this to new writers, do not completely use AI to write your story using AI's ideas and present them as your own, let there be your own creativity and use AI for enhancement of language, to get a blend of creativity for the new era, new generation. Keep everything together, a balance of everything, coz when there is balance, that's where things work. It's free advice! Take it or leave it. Next, Writing a review for my own story to get more engagement lol. I had been wondering for a while, the world is just so saturated and highly competitive that it feels frustrating that many people have the same idea and uniqueness is lacking. Even though you try your best to present something that might stand out and in the end you see your idea was already taken by someone else. But you still never give up until you reach that point where there is something that only you alone can think in this world and present it before someone else can. I hope every writer reaches that point and writes brilliant stories. Rest I wanted to say that... "I am... The Revolution!"

Rewriting another review and deleting the previous one, you seriously are doing well, everyone else are talking about the backstories but I loved the action, 33 chapters and not a disappointment, not bad at all, the mc is good, and also this story is going to be long so everything cannot be judged at once, so I'll keep checking out to see any update and read it.

Good book, keep updating, the beginning is good and it becomes engaging after a while. Writing quality is alright, keep improving. Also I won't exaggerate much, but the best part is Sivera's backstory. That's where I personally liked it, how things suddenly changed in his life was interesting to read about. Viewers, make sure to give it a try!

This is quite a good read, it is adventurous, mysterious, sometimes funny and it has a lot of action, sometimes drama, twists and overall a fun pack of everything you want, as a story and has potential. Keep going!

Good novel, keep going, I'll always be there to support this novel, it's going to progress to a great level. I hope it has a lot of depth yet to get.

Dayummm Dude! This is a freaking cool one, For real didn't knew it would take such turns and twists, starting is simple and basic, but as it progresses, it becomes better, there is mystery around many things, in the starting the quotes, that's a sick way to begin the story, Waiting for next chapters. Thanks for inviting me here!!

Hey yo, sorry bro, I was late in writing a review, this one is going great, keep that up, Out of many, I found this one interesting and different. Not so different plot wise but many novels on webnovel are usually of the solo leveling types of stories, with just system and weak to strong, and other things ya know, from the synopsis itself I drop it. This one has better story plot.

inspiring, good for all audiences and good characters. i hope you do a lot of world building, and character development as the story progresses. also has good backstories.

This is going to have a lot of story and not just fights like in every other action novel, where only fights take place for viewer attraction, the story will have increasing beauty, and has a lot of inspiration taken from previous fantasy stories and has a lot of stuff, world building, characters with backstories, mysteries, jolly characters, darkness of the world, technology and dragons together, a mixture of eras, to have everything. Good chapter length, extra information, etc. Way to go for a Shonen Anime.