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Remake name-Chaos Chronicles: Rise of the Cosmic Archon[Remastered]

作者: Realm_Weaver
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A remake of this novel has been released under the name Chaos Chronicles: Rise of the Cosmic Archon[Remastered] on my Patreon. patreon.com/LibraryofEnoch Join our community on Discord https://discord.com/invite/Gc97rsw37R

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Frost_Bite8 · 奇幻
4.2
237 Chs
目錄
0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :A New Beginning
2 :Aurora Star
3 :Elysium
4 :Prima Realm

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All I want to is this novel ain’t for me. But since this is a review I will list problems that this novel have or problems that I think are problems. 1. Constantly switching POV’s. The author has a thing for constantly switching POV’s multiple times in every chapter single chapter all up to chapter 21 Aka chapter 19 named Miracle. Above that I have no clue. 2. Certain words just don’t fit. Let’s say the word Lussum which is a Latin word for Order(i research the word and I didn’t where it said it is a Latin word for Order so I wonder where the author found the meaning of the word being Order) it is one thing to use words of different language by themselfs but using them in way you could say words that could have made sense if the right words were used but certain words just can’t be said together. For example Chaos and Lussum. You know what Lussum means but saying the words just don’t fit especially when a better substitute exists. For example saying Chaos and Order is better and more preferable by many and easier to understand. The words the author used are better off used as Names which he/she did. But when it comes to being used in a sentence that is not mentioning a person, entity’s name it just don’t sound right. 3. Does the the words Secret and Caution not exist? Mc reveal everything about himself to random whom he call grandpa who he only knew about 2 years or less. When I said he revealed everything about himself I mean literally. From his past life name, age, technique and cause of death to everything about himself in the present life. HE revealed everything like an open book.

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