Reincarnated as Shiro Oni in DXD

thr first chapter isn't exactly pulling if u want a fanfic too be taken seriously read my review if u are writing an u serious fanfic ignore my review your first chapter is one of the most cliche or generic chapters of seen on this app , i get is tempting to make your character overpowered but u are new to writing u can't have your MC be joggling so many abilities take it easy , choose one ability in particular u like the most and have the mc improve that ability to become op, if u are struggling writing a particular ability go to the superpower wiki and dont go for the generic reincarnation gimmick if u want to make it interesting have the mc be suddenly transported to another world without warning have him be reincarnated as a baby or have him be in an older body have it be that he gained his cheat not from a wish but from side effect of traveling to a different world bc his soul had to be rebuilt to handle the travel , have him figure out his abilities preferably through an accident, if u want him to be reborn as a baby , u can use it make comedic scenes , but dont spend too much time on it , , if u want to write an MC my advice to u is take inspiration from your favorite characters