Reborn as Hades In PJO

In 18 chapters nothing happened in the story. There was only a brief conversation with Hestia. The story moves too slowly and you write a lot of unnecessary words in each chapter.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

This one is good. There have been many Hades-PJO fics on this platform. All of them have fallen through and been dropped. I will fully support this with all my might. I'm fine with even one chapter a month. Just don't drop it.

The story as a whole is boring. But the writing quality is good. Oh, what ruins the story itself. Because whether you like it or not, Greek mythology is a story with a beginning, middle and end. So all The Greek mythology novels will have the same story.😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔

"God gives me wishes" retard story.

Till now, chapter 19, or chapter 13 since the story started, the development of the story has been very slow, the chapters are currently large info dumps or going off on tangents that don't seem to hold much relevance to the story's progression. As it is right now I don't recommend reading the story, it has barely started and in my opinion will face problems with people continuing to read the story if it's going to take another 7 chapters to properly hook readers. An improvement would be making the first five chapters full of information into auxiliary chapters, then putting in the summary space what kind of readers would like this style of writing.

The world background and character design is done well Pls don’t drop Pls update as frequently as possible 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

This has to be the worst pjo story ever written. The writing and story development are bad with nothing good about them like others have said how did u spend like 5 or 6 chps just writing about how they were making their forms you could have put all that in one chp. The world building is bad but not the worst but considering your basing it off a great story don’t know how you made it bad.

it's very good so far , it has good foundation you didn't neglect the lore and most importantly you didn't trap your self with op mc writing block . keep going, good job

The only mistake in this story is not having dialogues, not much interaction between the gods, I don't know, it seems like I'm watching a story without much character depth, if you knew how to make the most of it you would have used the ten years of war in the story, it was too quick , one moment Hades is having an internal monologue then boom, war, and the transition isn't the best, we don't know if Hades is simply explaining something that he knows about the war or is simply actually in the war, you only understand later.

Fill the chapters with useless words and in 19 chapters Hades only spoke once. It's a terrible story.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

劇透

This is a great book, it is a shame people get scared off by the wishes thing but he only uses it to become hades, not add super sayin powers to Percy Jackson or something that would make you willingly lobotomize your self.

The story may be slow, but the writing and world building are well done, don't let it fall apart. [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp]

Loving the novel so far I am wondering if the MC will have a harem because he is a god right?

It's good, I don't know why there are so many spam bad reviews, though.

Hades is my favourite god, the story is quite good, author knows the direction he wants to go with the story. Give it a read if you like Greek Mythos based SIs.

let him cook... let him cook....... let him cook!

The novel is slower than most you may find on webnovel but I don't mind it, the author takes time to describe the background of the story and has done a great job in describing the personalities of the different gods through the interactions. I wish the updates were more frequent as I'm thoroughly enjoying the book and I also hope that once the plot kicks in the pace of the book increases as well. I wouldn't want there to be a lot of info-dumps in the middle of the story though, would much prefer an auxiliary chapter with that info.

i say my only problem with this story is like 5 chapters is only for info dumps i wish you just did it all in one big chapter rather than spreading it out. also i wish the chapters were longer tbh

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