Re-Life In A Novel

Was not planning to write a review but since the author asked for feedback on the latest chapter here we go... First and foremost, this novel is well-written with close to no errors. The verbiage of the author is solid. This is important because writing quality is one of the primary things I personally consider while starting a novel. If you are like me, you should give this novel a try. As for the update stability qualms here either with a standard stability of one chapter per day. It's been merely 20 chapters but the story development has been great. The MC has already started working hard to get stronger in the world of the novel and the relationship between the characters is quite well fleshed out. Character designs is definitely one of the strong parts of this novel. Although most of the chapters have been filled with MC and the presumed FML so far, the other characters are definitely not one dimensional and have their own personalities. If I have to nitpick, I would point out that the sister character doesn't have much 'screen-time' despite her importance in the plot so far. Despite her being mentioned in almost all the chapters, the chapters we actually see her in is very less. The world background is honestly quite clear by this point. The story is set in a medieval era which lacks the presence of Mana or anything of the sort which is pretty hard to find in a transmigration novel which in itself is a magical phenomenon(I don't consider it a plot hole though as it was hinted that other worlds may possess mana). Overall, this novel has immense potential. But will the potential be realized or not, only time will tell.

Hello there, Author! I am just here to appreciate the work you have been doing. If there is anyone reading this review with mixed thoughts about whether to give this book a try or not, I would say go for it. Anyway, I would still like to mention a few points below. –So, Author, how long are you planning this Novel? Because the setup you are building up seems too much if this book ends up with 150–200 chapters. If it is longer than 300+, then you are doing good. –Oh, by the way, the writing in this book is on point, like no Mistakes at all.  –The Academy Arc started at like (28~chapters), and I am looking forward to it. –The MC and FML also look good together. Hope you continue further. –World building was done to the point it was required, and tbh, it is quite easy to imagine as this setting wasn't anything Magical or Otherworldly as it is a simple Mediaeval Period. So it's just your imagination. –Updates are good, with one chapter daily. The Author hasn't skipped a day as of now. –Also, the Author was conscious enough to add a good amount of Paragraph Comments with pictures of anything readers might struggle to imagine. Especially Mediaeval weapons and stuff. It was very thoughtful of the Author. The character arts of important characters were also given. –Anyway, that's it for the review. Note : The review is posted at 35 chapters. All the best for the next chapters, Author.

This is a good read . Mc is not a simp and has personality, so I'm looking forward to reading more

Hey there, My Awesome Readers! So, I just posted a few chapters of my Novel, and well, here's my shameless 5★ rating! -cue sarcastic applause- Now, onto the serious stuff. So, about this Novel, yeah, it's a baby right now, just a few chapters old. But believe me, it's my baby, and I love it with all its imperfections! I poured my heart and soul into crafting this story, and sure, there might be some plot holes big enough to drive a truck through and a character or two that needs a personality transplant, but hey, Rome wasn't built in a day, right? But this is where you come in! I need your feedback, your doubt, your skepticism, your "wait, what?" moments, and your "are you serious?" reactions. So, don't be shy! Share your thoughts. Tell me where the plot took a weird turn or where a character had a sudden change of heart for no reason. Let's dig into those doubts together! Your honest feedback is my compass, guiding me on this writing journey. With self-deprecating humour and a genuine eagerness to learn- -Your (not-yet-famous) -Author : WrightBrothers