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(I am trying to write a cool novel my grammar sucks so don’t coment on it period as I already know I don’t have anyone to help me edit and my phone can’t download anything as it’s a older model so it’s unedited pls ignore any grammar mistakes). (swear tho I will not mistake the word he and fucking she how do you even do that) A dood who is. Born from king frost cheeting and a sayan royal woman some random hollow somehow made it into it and passed in his bloodline to make a unique hybrid king cold sends the kid to a planet as he can’t kill his son His son hurling through space as a lizard bitch kicked his spacecraft befor it fully left the atmosphere So he is spiraling through space and a portal opens where it leads who knows read to find out There will be a harem max of 11 min of 6 I will never ntr and beware of a few wierd kinks The mc will be slightly insane And I won’t get stuff 100 precent Also beware I’m really shameless Now I ask you to bare with me while I have bad grammar I know this and honestly can’t change it Also who like Android 18 and 21 as I can author magic them up if I get enough comments later in the story and power stones Now ima be posting in my leasure FYI On another note any who want to complain About gramer I will say do you fucking want to edit my shit for me for free cus I will tell you to do it if I see any comments For anyone who says I could do better or your story sucks i will personally go look at your profile through that very coment and if I don’t see I novel I will shame you If I do see a novel but it’s droped I will also shame you I’m normally very chill but if you do manage to tick me off I won’t even coment to you I will flat off show everyone how much of a hypocrite you are To any normal peaple I will never go this far I will only do this to total pricks don’t worry And to anyone who I go and give 1 Star to every novel really fucker that is not cool speaking of I may make a discord just for pricks like that we will call it the shame discord
A baby was born into a unknown race
King frost of the frost demon race had cheeted with the hot royal woman from the last pure blood sayan left
Unlike the vegetas why they name there planet after that dood I don't know huge ego
That very sayan woman was in labor fighting off some wierd masked monster it seemed to eat the ki from the very air
She managed to punch the monster but got wounded in the proses as well as somehow managed to eat a lot of its blood and dna as she was gasping with it on top of her
she managed to call king frost as he was the fauther who cheated on his wife
And told him she will probably die in child birth and to get the baby and send it to a world of a simalar body type
And not to keep it as she doesn't want her baby to be raised like frost demons do or sayans and that his wife would harm the child if he did keep it
And he shuld send him to a planet called earth
To delete all the information on that planet and make shure no one harms it and leave the child who knows it may be a god to them
So the kid was born and the mom died as she predicted
The kid was put in a space pod to be sent to earth
The original wife who got cheated on saw the kid how she found out who knows but she decided to kick it hard right befor it fully left the atmosphere
If it lives then or dies she douse not care she just hope she made it shit its pants
And the child saw her kick his space ship and thought you lizard looking bitch how dare you kick my sweet ride
They see me flying crying and flying and riding dirty
Then preceded to tune into some random planets music as it was spiraling through the universe
A portal opened up out of nowhere he thought what the fuck is thaaaas the zoomed of at the speed of light to some unknown universe
In a few hundred universes many peaple were predicting that a person of questionable sanity and born of three bloodlines will come to there planet and make great change and it will be good and bad
Meanwhile in the spinning portal of doom a baby is getting really annoyed with all the spinning and is screaming that this is to much like the fabled drugs
Then precedes to faint as he entered the one place that successfully merges his bloodline to domond hollowd sayan
(If you are wondering what he looks like he looks like a pale toddler
with a tail with spiky black and white spiraling tail
and almost trible like marks all over his pale body that looks like it balances good and evil in a chaotic balance he has spikes going out of his back that a firm bone wings that are spikes and wings at the same time one bone like wing is black and the outher is white the white one emits a demonic and evil feel and energy and the black one emits a holy and good energy and feel and in his spine there is a silver black and white energy
It is spiraling and on his skin on his spine there is a primal mark that spirals black white and silver
His face looks like god of highscools mc with the sharpness of ichigo
If he was a baby
His eyebrows are sharp for a baby
He has silver hair that has a gold shine
He has two horns going out of his head
(So all I can say as the author is he is one bad ass looking baby
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FYI it's 2 am and I'm sick so ima post another chap then sleep
I want to hear positive reviews no negative ones
You coment anout anything but my gramer to change as that is one thing I can't change as I have said
I want feedback on stuff I can change if I can't change it then don't tell me
Also this will be the last time I repeat this so much I just don't want anyone to get half way through and say hey this grammer sucks and then tell me to fix shit I have no control over you don't want to read my stuff don't I am not forceing you
If you want a story to fill your tame and are not picky you came to the right place
You don't talk shit about free food
