Naruto: The Birth Of Fenrir and his Keeper

writing is pretty good, the start was dark and really sad almost cried, seems to brighten up after the rebirth. Would recommend.

The star is a bit ruff if you more sensitive, but I find it's a perfect set up for the most mentality. It's a unique idea and the past isn't fast but jot slow its a good consistent pace. Also he has a awesome dad in his new life rare to see a non organ character. In my opinion it's 10/10

First of all I want to say I'm enjoying the story but I have two gripes with this story their is a small one and a major one. The small one is when reincarnators are introduced into the story one of my favorite things is they bring either modern ideas views or inventions that are introduced to the new world. They don't have to be groundbreaking or crazy beneficial even if it's just simple food that don't exist in the world and they say hey family I'm going to make dinner tonight and blow their mind with a pizza or cheeseburger. They don't all need to be introducing guns or cars and whatnot. Another one I would assume would be some what easy would be writing(copying) a book of some sort should be pretty easy. The big one is we are 49 chapters deep and 1 of the big points of this story is the dog fenrir and he's nowhere to be seen after mc being reincarnated what the hell

the story takes way to much time to develop and almost nothing happened in 45 chapters. The story is really boring. I do not recommend at all, but the character développement is good. It's just I don't want to wait till chapter 100 before one fight happen. So much potential wasted.

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Writing is really good. This shut had me in tears but also excitement due to his personality that will develop. Story was Really Dark at the beginning but Fluffs out a little after his Rebirth. This story checks it. Im adding this in my library as it has way too much potential.

This story has so much depth to it, and I feel like everybody should read it. But I must warn you that if you are the emotional type, you might end up crying.

I remember this fic. I read it till the point the mc meets the scientist and son who experiments on their unusual dogs for stronger breed. Well, a 5 stars for the fact that it left a impression

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This is a rollercoaster of emotions def the beginning, slow paced start but that is somewhat fine, but i do wish it would move forward a bit more or just get a regular update which would definitely help. One suggestion to Author i want Fenrir now, so hurry it up and give me the fluff that is needed in this story.

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While reading a few initial chapters I again want an op MC who tortures bullies just for the heck of it, you know when a bully asks him why does he do this, just replies: "Because I can and I want to"

You have an amazing book that has great potential I just want to say I love your book I hope you could at least have a better update schedule Thank you

This story is honestly one of the best that I have ever read. I hope that this story will have more updates 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊please keep up the good work!

I'm very impressed. The amount of thought and effort put into this is commendable. I hope other writers use this novel as a reference for their works, especially about characterization, relations, mentality, and politics. The author clearly understands the implications behind the Naruto universe and uses excellent critical thinking skills. Great work. 4.6/5.