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Naruto: The Avengers

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Naruto left the Elemental nations and wound up in a world where flying metal man, magic, and gods exist. Jiongu, seal master, RinneTenseiSharingan. Extremely AU. Naruto!OP NarutoxHarem. Chapter length and quality would increase as time goes on. Crossed published in FFN and AO3 https://discord.gg/UcKaAtJ

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Chapter 1Prologue: In a new world

-The ruins of Uzushiogakure-

"Well, I guess this is it, huh?" Naruto said with a sad voice.

"We know it's going to happen someday. It's just a matter of when." Kurama said.

Standing in the ruins of the home of his ancestors. Naruto stood in front of the gate with its doors covered in writing. He wore a dark orange jacket over a black long sleeve shirt. He also wore a modified black anbu pants with multiple pockets and a pair of brown boots. His long bright blond hair is covered by the hood of his jacket.

After the defeat of Kaguya Otsutsuki, a short period of peace has been observed in the Elemental Nations. Countries and Hidden Villages alike are working hand in hand to recover from the disasters caused by the Fourth Great Shinobi War. But of course, it wouldn't last long.

Everybody knew it. It only takes a single spark of human greed and hates to reverse all the progress achieved.

Nobody knew better how fickle human nature is than Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze. The last heir of the Senju and Uzumaki clans from his mother's side, Kushina Uzumaki, and the last heir of the Namikaze clan and member of the Uchiha clan from his father's side, the Yondaime Hokage Minato Namikaze.

As a kid, Naruto has always been the target of hate by the citizens of Konoha due to his unique circumstances. He was chosen as the jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi by his own father after it escaped from its previous vessel, his mother. Naruto was raised ignorant from his own heritage by the order of the Sandaime Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi. Naruto became the target of scorn and hatred of the ignorant masses due to him being the prison of the Kyuubi. Only recently has this outlook been changed due to his role in the Fourth Shinobi War and the defeat of Kaguya Otsutsuki.

Tired of the cycle of hatred, Naruto trained hard to overcome the challenges that the path to peace would face. He became the foremost master of Fuinjutsu, acquired the ultimate dojutsu RinneTenseiSharingan, or simply called Shinigan, became the first full sage, and acquired the Takigakure's famed kinjutsu, the Jiongu all after the war. He also set out to allow himself to become the jinchuuriki of the nine bijuu. Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu, Son Gokū, Kokuō, Saiken, Chōmei, Gyūki, and Kurama. This would ensure that the power of the bijuu wouldn't be abused by any hidden village and would allow some form of freedom to the bijuu due to his modified Death God Seal that allows partial autonomy of the bijuu inside the seal.

An unforeseen side effect of all the power he acquired was that he became essentially immortal. An overreaction to his predicament, he decided to leave the world he has known and live a relatively normal life in another world. He dedicated his knowledge of fuinjutsu and near limitless amount of chakra in his disposal, be created a bridge to another world.

Packing up everything he would need and saying one last goodbye to the only world he has known, the 21-year-old Naruto, the hero of the Elemental Nations, left the world in a flash of light so bright it rivaled the sun, without so much as a goodbye to his friends and families.

-Central Park, New York, USA, 2005-

"That is the worst Hiraishin EVER!" Naruto shouted with a fervor

"Shut up! If it's bad for you, how about for us in here!" Chomei replied with equal enthusiasm.

"I guess its a success since we're not dead" Gyuuki added with mirth

"Kit, we need to get out of here. We may have attracted some unwanted attention with our exit" Kurama advised

"Yeah, yeah. I'm going. Sheesh" Naruto said

Applying suppression seals on his nape to cover his chakra signature, he left the scene in as much speed and stealth he could muster without chakra enhancements. Hiding in the shadows of the trees around him, he noticed there are paths and structures in the forest. On second thought, it's not a forest but a large park.

"Who the hell makes a park the size of Konoha." Naruto thought to himself

It took 10 seconds for him to reach the clearing of the park. Still hiding from the shadows, Naruto took notice of the world he landed on. What he saw awed and surprised him. Buildings higher than the Hokage Monument everywhere, carriages running without horses or ox, bright lights that reach for the sky and people, lots and lots of people. All were looking towards where he came from.

"Holy shit" Isobu drawled out.

"Imagine climbing one of those." Son Goku blurted out.

"You're really just big monkey, aren't you." Kokuo teased.

"We need a base of operations while we figure out how this world works." Saiken said.

"Yeah. Let me try something. I feel we are still not far enough from where we came." Naruto said.

Getting Hiraishin kunai from his pocket, he threw it hard at a 45-degree angle to maximize distance and to miss any buildings in its immediate path. When he felt the kunai stopped, he asked Kurama, "Any people near where that kunai landed?"

"None from what I can tell." Kurama replied.

"Ok, here goes nothing."

With a flash of light, he's gone.

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1 :Arrival

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Dioseethis
DioseethisLv6

I liked it so I went ahead and read all the remaining chapter at fanfiction.net so here's my honest review: There's really not much to be criticize. Few misspelling here and there and a little bit of grammar fix and it will be great. Story wise the author has a plan, plot and a clear direction on where he wanna take the story which a good thing to have so that an author won't get loss and write himself into a pickle. Sure it's still a ripoff without that much originality but it's a fanfic what can you do about it. It's already good fanfic wise. Characters The protagonist is Gary Stu through and through but again, it's a fanfic. Almost every fanfic has Gary or Mary stu protagonist. But let get to meat and potatoes. Dialogue. The author was able to create great dialogue between characters and insinuate there character. The author was able to make dialogue that seems natural and capture the characters characteristics which is rare for a fanfic. Mainly because it's quite hard and could easily turn cringey fast but the author could hold it and did a good job on it. I wish more authors create dialogue in there books more. Sure there are sometimes some dialogue miss but still it's pretty great. On a completely unrelated note I just wanna address this. I've seen many people do this especially in the internet. What the protagonist have is not a harem, it's an open relationship which is completely different from harem. Harem is group of female sharing a single mate or vice versa. Women can have harem too. The protagonist has a relationship with both women and by the looks of it the women are also in a relationship with each other. That's an open relationship not a harem. Also cheating is still cheating as s*x is still s*x even if its a girl and girl or boy and boy. Doesn't matter what your partner gender is it's still ***. Lots of people fetishize this thing but its still not right. It's mainly because of **** that people gloss over this but if your significant other had s*x with someone even if it's the same gender as them its still cheating, cuckolding or what ever you wanna call it. No matter how hot it seem. Anyway it's still a good read.

LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

It's Amazing. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) (Ooh) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry

Photosphere
PhotosphereLv14

This is an absolute masterpiece of fanfic if I have anything to say first. Writing Quality: Perfect, I can count with one hand the typos I saw in thirty-ish chapters. Excellent delivery and proper use of synonymous. Stability of Updates: Great as well. Story Development: Naruto came to Marvel to change EVERYTHING, don't spect most things to happen like the original, I love that. Character Design: Naruto is still an experienced, funny and genius Ninja. Marvel characters are also well portrayed. World Background: Totally loyal to MCU to the spec of dust. Now, my opinion: Dude, author, fam... The moment I started reading it I knew it was from fanfiction.net you only get this much quality from there. Really if most good authors of that site posted their works in this site... They would topple over the ranking in a day. I have nothing to say about this masterpiece, I only read 30 chapters and I absolutely love it, the way you describe the scenario, the suspense, tension building between characters, Naruto and Nat have a lot of chemistry, that first date lol, very Naruto kind of thing to do. I'm very expectant about the future of this novel, it says 'Harem', I love harems but just this 30 chapters made me want it to be just Natasha, but well I'm open to possibilities as long as proper drama is introduced (Don't make Natasha just accept it as if it is the most natural thing) and as long as it doesn't go to more than two or three. I also love the way Naruto handles everything, what a perfect way of using his clones and Hiraishin, his shinobi way of handling himself makes everything more interesting than most fanfic when he just transforms and gets it done. It makes tension to know how everyone will react when he could have just transformed and finished everything yet he only played the ninja around with them. This fanfic deserves top 10, U gettin' my stones from now on.

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