Kingdom of Ruins

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Good build-up and writing. Pretty good concept and world-building,and I found the interactions very interesting, Even though the novel is just starting, it may tun out some thing great

From the very beginning of your story, the reader can feel that you have an interesting concept. The plot is intriguing, your characters also. You're doing well! The only thing I feel is missing - more descriptions, explanations.

The world building and character development is quite good. There isn't much here yet, but definitely something to watch out for. Definitely deserving of 5 stars

For me, the thing that really stuck out was the rich description of the world. I'm a sucker for good old fashioned world-building. I thought the system and the progression came naturally. Good job!

A solid story with a fantastic start. The characters seem interesting and the plot is unique. I know the author likes to use the video game style combat descriptions which is something that I don't see negatively nor positively. I would like a bit more description of how the characters look and on the environment. The writing avoids grammar mistakes, but I think more could be added to this story. Cheers! Keep going writer.

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Nice Job!

Hmmm, interesting concept and plot. There's a grammatical error but I pretty much don't care about it because I understand well the story. Overall, the potential is not pretty bad.

For a first time writing a novel, the author has done a fantastic job! I would love to see more characterisation of Roran and other characters: How does he walk? What is he thinking beyond just killing the beasts? How tall is he? Just paint the image and traits of your characters for your readers. Either way, I have extremely enjoyed reading this novel so far and am on the edge of my seat to see how this author matures as they continue to write. I advise the author join the webnovel writers discord and browse around to see how they can elevate their skill. Keep rising!

Roran has been written so well! The story has been written in a gaming sort of way which is definitely unique, but some readers may find it difficult to understand and it does chop up the flow of the story. Nonetheless, it was a great read, congrats! P.S. There was a little tiny thing which I found to be quite bothersome - the repetition of the character's name. At one time 'Ronan' was used 3 times in 3 lines.

Start is pretty interesting! And even though first chapter just had few sentences, it was enough for get me excited. I liked the world building of this story and dialogues are also very written. And I am very excited to read the upcoming chapters, keep up the good work!

I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel in the few chapters I've read seems to have an interesting plot, but it's too early to say anything, I hope the author continues to strive because this novel has a lot of potential.