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In the multiverse with a Magitech system

作者: Loxy_Matx
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A young soldier dies and is reincarnated with a system that can create any machine he wants..... Read as he goes on his journey through the unknown with tools of his own creation. I do not own the cover image Changed title for clarity since it is a somewhat magic and technology theme....( ̄▽ ̄)" New cover image.....hope you like it...( ̄▽ ̄)"

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Chapter 1Chapter 1:Second chance

*Boooom!!!!*

A large explosion resounded out in a lush jungle filled with huge trees.

Me:*cough....cough*''I could only cough as blood filled my lungs due to all the gunshots I had sustained during my last stand against these damn terrorists.

I couldn't believe that I was about at such a young age of 16.A time when I should be doing normal teen stuff and not jumping in guns blazing against suicidal pricks.

The last explosion had taken my left arm and leg but I somehow managed to survive,which was not a good thing on my part because I was the last one remaining from my squad during this mission and I looked like two face due to the burns.

Me:Hahahaha.....*cough cough*''I could only laugh outloud while coughing mouthfuls of blood.

Looking back at my life I had nothing to my name and no one to go back to since I didn't know my parents,they sold me to a military facility for some extra cash.

I had hated them all my life but now that I'm going to die all of my hate and anger was nowhere to be found I was only filled with happiness that my suffering would soon end.

My vision became darker as my body became colder and colder'Is this death?'It felt warm and gentle so I accepted my fate and closed my eyes with a large smile on my face.

.....

Me:Huh?....Wha....where am I?

I checked my surroundings and found myself standing in some kind of room,the room was dimly lit with a cold white floor and a system of monitors in the middle other than that there was nothing.

I looked at myself only to realize that I was nothing but a mass of gold coloured conciouseness.

Me:Is this a soul?''It honestly felt wired since I didn't have any feet or hands,I found it odd that I didn't panick either since this was clearly abnormal.

But maybe this was just how the afterlife looked,I shrugged off my thoughts and floated towards the monitors.

When I was hovering just a few meters before them,they hummed to life,'Maybe I can watch anime on this.'I was I huge anime fan during my life since it could help me forget all those lives I had snuffed and I always felt it was better than going to some shrink to tell me what I already knew that I was broken..

The computer thingy lit up the whole room before dimming down.A hologram of different shapes came out before rushing towards me.

Me:Ahhhhhhhh''I screamed in pain as my whole soul felt like it was being torn apart.After a few minutes of me grunting and graoning,the pain subsidded and I finally closed my eyes to rest.

???:Welcome to the supreme tech system.''

I heard a voice revibrate throughout the whole room before I shut my eyes and everything went dark.

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Ugh! I barely got to chapter 20 and it's already killing me with boredom. The guy is stupid and basically all he has achieved was because the author gave him plot armor. Think about this. A soldier who can massacre a lot of soldiers with a physical body of a child cannot kill some chunins even with overpowered limbs, eyes and plasma weapons -_- How about this, he wants an army of children who has powerful genetics to turn them into op ninjas but he himself decided to make himself a cyborg with barely any human parts left. Why not just make a op robot army? Btw the author also said that he has not mana and chakra and decided that he can use them using robotic parts. Wow. Just wow. Did the author ever thought why no one wants to make himself into a robot or almost robot being except for that piece of **** author who turned himself into a dickless ultron? Let me answer this, a robot can be powerful but because it's a robot it has a limit. A robot cannot ascend higher than the limits of it's parts. Metals cannot evolve, mutate, or upgrade yourself as a being because you'll only be limited to what materials there are available. This is fucking stupid. When I saw magitech and that it's in a naruto world setting, I thought he'd make machines to upgrade his body into an op being and use advanced magitech to get what he wants. You cannot imagine how stupid I felt when I found out that the mc has a background that are irrelevant. He was a soldier who massacred groups of soldiers, he was a veteran due to being a child soldier, he died happy because living was torture but when he transmigrated he somehow became incompetent as a soldier, became a genius in chemistry, biology, engineering, metallurgy etc, doesn't care about his subordinates and treats them like toys even though he clearly cried for his comrades in the backstory. This is basically a stupid novel without prior planning and a stable plotline. Also emotionally, mentally unstable mc is not entertaining to read. It's like hearing the rant of a mental institution's patient. It's either boring or frustratingly stupid.

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