webnovel

In mha as Miquella the kind (MHA/Elden Ring)

作者: thereddeath
Anime & Comics
連載 · 316.8K 流覽
  • 12 章
    內容
  • 4.9
    12 評分
  • NO.200+
    鼎力相助
摘要

Mike, a 16-year-old gamer, dies in a tragic accident after a long gaming session. He finds himself in a void, where a being of light tells him he can be reincarnated. The being explains that his new powers and destination will be based on his last game and show. Mike, having played Elden Ring and watched My Hero Academia, chooses to go to the world of My Hero Academia with the powers of Rahdahn. However, the being informs him that his reincarnation will be determined by a wheel of fate, and he ends up being reincarnated as Miquella. I want to clarify that this story is purely for fun and to help me practice my writing skills. While I am open to receiving constructive criticism to improve my writing, I kindly request that any feedback provided remains respectful and constructive. Insults directed towards my story will not be accepted. Image not mine I found the image on Tumbler by someone named serrraphim.

標籤
5 標籤
你也許也喜歡

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews conplaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · 漫画同人
4.6
792 Chs

評分

  • 全部評分
  • 寫作品質
  • 更新穩定度
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景
評論
點贊
最新
Domslayer458
Domslayer458Lv4Domslayer458

Just Read the first chapter and I’m liking it so far. keep up the great work! 🫵🏿=🐐

Retardedmadman
RetardedmadmanLv11Retardedmadman

5 Stars cause Eldenring and is Miquella straight in this fic?

elpepe
elpepeLv2elpepe

There are very few finished Elden Ring fanfics, that's why this one gets 5 stars, so please continue and don't stop uploading chapters............................

Christian_Quirimit_7442
Christian_Quirimit_7442Lv4Christian_Quirimit_7442

I haven't read it yet, but i hope you finish this story

killowat_111
killowat_111Lv4killowat_111

I haven't read it yet, I hope it's not yuri. 😂

Pinguimxxcc
PinguimxxccLv3Pinguimxxcc

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

ForsakenChild
ForsakenChildLv4ForsakenChild

disclaimer: im not good with english as english is my second language, and im not really that experienced with writing a review/critique writing this at chapter 10 Story Development: Pacing is kinda rush especially in chapter 10, Author could've expanded on the CPR as it's a purely original content, could've Miquella interact more with the other characters especially if he was interested in forming bonds and trust with his other classmates as stated in that chapter too that as a class president he wants to form that bond well considering he agreed on the restaurant offer, the media break-incident could be expanded well.. id let that slide because author probably didn't want it because you could have just watched/read the original series then so thats okay.. anyways from early chapters fo now it feels kinda rushed. (2.5/5) writing Quality: Theres no awkward dialogues, as far as im concerned. (4/5) Character Design: mc along with his sister are quite bland right now, theres no moment where im particularly very impressed by him for now. (3/5) World background: with japan and all and wirh the mha having a lot of things going on there, author could've expanded the story from the original to his own original fanfic where it deviates greatly from the original. overall its just the same with s few add ons. (3.5/5) update Stability: unstable to say the least, Well with authors education status its kinds unredrstable so i wont be too hard here (4/5) overall: 3.6/5 score

SekaiForLife
SekaiForLifeLv4SekaiForLife

I am enjoying the read so far. And recommend others give it a try.

Gilgamesh100
Gilgamesh100Lv1Gilgamesh100

Me encantan los fanfic con elden ring y sobre todo nunca había encontrado uno con miquella como protagonista, definitivamente un de las ideas mas innovadoras de este tipo de fanfic espero que no la abandones y continues con el gran trabajo que haces, recomiendo este fanfic al 100%

ghostensaop
ghostensaopLv13ghostensaop

love the fic already

DaviToledo
DaviToledoLv13DaviToledo

it's good, but the problem is dont have some more chapters

Rob_Low
Rob_LowLv4Rob_Low

It’s good and has a lot of potential

鼎力相助

關於作品

報告