I'm Majin Buu, but this doesn't seem to be DragonBall (Young Justice)

Didn’t like the fact that he made the mic not look like buu. Kid buu would have been so cool.

.............................. I said it already

This has decent potential, but as it is now, there are only two chapters. The main character is definitely going to be OP, but with wishes I haven't seen before. The chapters are a bit short, but a little is better than nothing. (Coughs in self burn) There are a few minor spelling mistakes, but nothing too bad. It seems more like a mistype more than anything. Otherwise, the grammar is decent, there are hardly any misspellings, the story has decent potential, and the main character will basically be a god.

ok buu in Young Justice is really interesting. I'm like Keep up the good work.

it's written like a summary and the Skip from one scene to the other is a mess. overall not good.[img=disgusted]

I like where it going so far but can I’m looking for another ff like this. It’s a young justice fr where my is like the son of batman and big barda and has darkness powers or something and raven was the fmc pls yall it’s killing me tha i cant find it