Heatherland.

The story was interesting. It reminds me of my all time favorite Chibi and Armor Brotherhood, if you know what I'm saying. Hahaha. Anyway, the writing style and quality is good but it gets a little bit confusing when it gets to dialogue. Only a little okay? The story development wasn't there yet but it's actually nice that the author takes his time to give development to the two MCs. The world background or the world setting of the story give me quite a surprise. It's quite different from what I initially thought when I saw the book cover and when I read the synopsis. Overall this book has so much potential.

I randomly bumped into this novel, it's great and the characters are memorable and I grew attachment with each of them. It is as if they are real. Great work author

I like that the book is mostly dialogue driven to keep the plot moving forward. The closeness of the two main characters is more friendship than brotherly; which I believe is a stronger bond (chosen family and all). I also love the differences in their personalities with one being more happy go lucky and the other the worrier. Good book thus far.

The primary characters in this novel are emotional. The world and issues they face make this book worth reading. I love Micah and Peter's closeness. Due to the rare two major characters, the plot is intriguing. The plot progresses well, but not too fast. Overall, the author writes well and has promise.

The main characters in this story are written to be packed with emotion, the world they inhabit and the conflicts they face are well worth giving this book a read!

Loving the brotherhood bond between Micah and Peter. The plot is interesting since rare is the times when we see two protagonist. Plot progression/pacing is good not too fast. Overall huge amount of potential and the author's writing is also good

I am glad I came across this book! It has an amazing storyline and the characters are just wonderfully explained. Each one has a different characteristic that makes them even more outstanding. I read along the lines and could feel myself in the story. Amazing work!

The author's ability to draw me in with just one chapter speaks volumes about their storytelling prowess, and I'm genuinely excited to embark on this literary journey. Keep it up.

I think one of you're strengths of this novel is its well-developed characters. But The pacing of the novel is a concern. While there are moments of action, they are often overshadowed by long stretches of exposition and unnecessary details. This imbalance hampers the flow of the story and makes it difficult to maintain interest. Also the writing style could benefit from further refinement. The prose is often clunky and lacks finesse, hindering the overall reading experience.try to fix that

Hi so I just found this on reddit and I got to say this is pretty good! the characters are great especially how you handle the dialogue and the premise and plot is interesting enough to keep me to invested. Oh and if you have time I was hoping if you could critique my webnovel Deadmen Manhattan. You don't have to if you don't want to, you can ignore this if you want. I just want to know your thoughts that's all.

IM HERE FOR 5 STARS! BECAUSE I WANTED IT SO DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE Good story, interesting story, good world background, good design character, love your writing skill is so beautiful

I saw and went through the book a lot. It is a brilliant story with a good plot and fantastic adventure. The two out how they go on their journey and fight battles, It is all amazing. As for the world it is purely polished to understand everything and the writing style is easily flowing Good book and I will keep up with it.

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Although the synopsis is not really clear, I was surprised by how well written the novel is! It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds naturally. I took liking in Micah, he is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!

'Heatherland' captivates with its Eastern Fantasy tale, following princes Peter and Micah through self-discovery. The orphanage setting adds depth, exploring friendship and challenging authority. Engaging narrative and vivid descriptions make it a promising read, leaving me eager for more."

The writing quality is great overall, I have no major complaints. It is not too complex, but it also isn't too simplistic to the point that it becomes redundant or dull. The characters are well made and developed, what I'd like to see more is more description of what they look like so I can envision them. The background is great as well. To the writer, I welcome you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.

When I started reading the novel, I did not have much of an expectation. I thought this could be one of those dime a dozen stories out there on this platform. But lo and behold! I was greeted with an orphanage scene which offered maturity of themes and a serious issue about orphan kids. This is an amazing story. I am reading this and recommend to others to read.

This story features really well-written main characters! And the compelling world they navigate, along with the conflicts they encounter, make the book highly recommended. It's a must read!

The quality of writing is great as well as the way it engages with the characters and environment. Only at the early chapters but I still can't help but want to read more! I'll review again once I'm done reading but so far so good!

I have written a review of the same name but of a different chapter count. Anyways I'll just redo the review of this book.The quality of story is good. It is engaging and the characters are relatable. I can tell that a good detail of planning was done with the story. Despite the story being slower paced compared to most webnovels I have read. I still find the story interesting.The writing quality is good as well. The author took time with the writing which I can say made the story more clear and precise. That's all for my assessment. Thank you for reading my review!