Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor

Obligatory shameless author review here, im not gonna sugarcoat it, this is my first novel. My pacing might seem too slow or too quick at times, my grammar might fail me as im not english native and i might make plot mistakes here and there (hope not). Thing is i will give it my best in hope you will enjoy this story To clarify a few things: mc is neither good nor evil, he always acts with his goal (which at ch4 is still not explained but very much hinted) in mind and actions he might take good or bad they may seem are, in a way, necessary for it. He still has his own sense of morality and he knows that since he is born where he shouldnt then the plot might change where it shouldn't as well, he knows that he will need to get involved in a way or another to as his goal requests him to. He is a human, remember that. He isnt an evil god of mischief, neither he is the chosen hero of justice, he is as you will learn soon enough a man of contraddictions. I dont wanna spoil too much, hope you enjoy :)

there is only 1 chapter so i cant tell a lot but: its well written the mc doesnt look like he will end as a op boring mc no harem and a malfoy blood traitor can be very interestin

This is really an interesting story, i like the fact that the main guy doesn't seem to get broken after a few chapters, and i like the effort in trying to make the other characters feel alive even without him even if that means more words and effort. Overall i would say ton of potential, lets see after a few more chapters in.

Not at a lot of chapters, but a shitload of potential, it's writing quality is very good compared to what you find in other fanfics. it's very early so background and story/character development is still unknown

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

Its looking good, so far the chapters are well written and there hasnt been any major flaws in it. A good fanfic overall. Hope for more chapters.

I really like the concept of this fanfic, and I think its a great so far (or at least up to ch 5) Strongly recommend it

This story could be described as "meh". The grammar is poor, but the story is still legible. The main character gets out of his way to befriend Harry, but goes to a different house. The story isn't terrible, but I still dropped it several chapters in.

I like the Author's writing style like his scrambled thoughts, I know it's little sure but good and honestly like the characters although I would like a little more interactions with Draco not too many but some he is his brother after all and in the same house . So I really Dig the book Good job Author

surprisingly a great read, a nice concept considering no one ever chooses that specific family. im keepin it spoiler free, but ya check it out, the author really seems to care ☺

below awerage fiction even for this site - grammar mistakes - point of view problems - no characterisation + the thing with core levels is interesting

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This is really an interesting story, i like the fact that the main guy doesn't seem to get broken after a few chapters, and i like the effort in trying to make the other characters feel alive even without him even if that means more words and effort. Overall i would say ton of potential, lets see after a few more chapters in.