Greece: From Kingdom To Empire

it is my first time writing a novel .i hope you enjoy it properly . it is a shameless review anyway 😁😁....

yee. my smooth monkie brain enjoyed, recommend for my fellow smooth brain monke.

The book has potential but something is missing. For example, your writing needs little work. You are writing in 3rd person pov but there are lot of fourth wall breaking. Instead of saying the mc’s name you are writing protagonist. I don’t know why but it is very weird. I am not going to be too harsh as only 1 chapter is released. Maybe I’ll review again after you upload more chapter.

great work keep it up full review from me

So far good story, I'm looking for more chapters to get clearer view of the story

The plot of story is nice and intriguing. The character and the nuances of the background are well explained. I look forward for more chapters to attain a clear idea of the story development.

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Trama super legal! Sinto que muita pesquisa foi feita. A escrita e o ritmo também são envolventes e até agora gostei muito de ler o que li!-

It's an amzing book, especially the first chapter,I love your writing style, keept it up and with time you'll get way better than what you are now.[img=recommend]

I like how you made your character not rush in without having plan in place for when he does become King of Greece in future and the many challenges he will face on his journey. Without risk there is no reward. Thank you for the story you made.

The novel has just begun, so the first three chapters were pretty simple, and the only thing that has me hooked now is the MC. I think that the story is going to be interesting if it has great and unique subplots prepared to catch readers attention. I liked the read for now, but I hope the writer can keep updating it regularly.

Totally love it but the updates please make it 2 to 3 chapters a day thank you

I'll be honest in my assessment of the book - the concept of someone from the present being reincarnated into the body of a young prince in the past is fascinating. It's like a blend of time travel and reincarnation, and it definitely caught my attention. The story has great potential, and I'm curious to see where it leads. I enjoyed the first-person, present-tense storytelling, although it took a few paragraphs to get used to it. However, I found it difficult to distinguish between when the protagonist was speaking versus when he was or when the protagonist was thinking versus when the narrator was speaking. The lack of clarity threw me off, and I sometimes struggled to identify who was speaking in a dialogue. Moreover, there wasn't enough description or explanation of the speakers' emotions or the setting they were in, which may have been intentional but felt lacking to me. However, this could be attributed to the author's writing style. Despite the shortcomings, I believe that once the writing quality improves, the book could turn out to be a beautiful story. I have only read up to the 6th chapter, and it's too early to tell, but I am optimistic about the book's potential.

Super cool plot! I sense a lot of research has been done. The writing and pacing is also engaging and so far I liked reading what I've read very much!

Title: Gripping Introduction to a Tale of Adversity and Peril Review: In the first chapter of "Greece: From Kingdom To E...," the author skillfully sets the stage for a thrilling and emotional journey. The protagonist, Nikolas Papadopoulos, is introduced as a determined young man with dreams of providing a better life for his family. The contrast between his aspirations and the harsh realities of the American immigration system creates an immediate sense of empathy and relatability. The narrative unfolds against the vibrant backdrop of Manhattan, vividly described through the lens of Nikolas's pursuit to catch a bus. The author's attention to detail immerses the reader in the bustling city streets and the protagonist's tireless efforts. Nikolas's internal struggles, fueled by the conflicting ideals of the American dream and the obstacles he faces, add depth to his character and evoke a sense of resilience. The story takes a dramatic turn as the bus journey becomes a battleground of fear and danger. The author masterfully builds suspense, expertly balancing Nikolas's obliviousness to the impending threat with the growing chaos surrounding him. The inclusion of a terrorist plot and the bus driver's hidden agenda injects an element of high-stakes suspense into the narrative, ensuring readers are kept on the edge of their seats. Throughout the chapter, the author demonstrates a keen understanding of pacing and tension. The introduction of Nikolas's family and his motivations for immigrating imbues the story with emotional weight, creating a strong foundation for future character development and personal stakes. Additionally, the exploration of the complex issues surrounding immigration adds a layer of social relevance and prompts reflection on larger societal challenges. One aspect to note is the handling of sensitive subject matter, particularly terrorism. The author approaches the topic with sensitivity, focusing on the impact it has on the protagonist and the ensuing consequences rather than sensationalizing the act itself. This approach ensures that the narrative remains grounded in character-driven storytelling.

The plot is quite unique and has a lot of potential, but there are quite a lot of grammatical errors in this book. It was also somewhat weird that the fourth wall was being broken from time to time. Despite all that, I think this was a good read; keep it up, author!

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I like the idea behind it. I am a native english speaker, if you allow me to, I'll edit the writing and make it clearer, then repost it on my page, with all credits and links to you of course.