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Greatest Marine in One Piece Universe

作者: Crazibrains_
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"My treasure is yours for the taking, But you'll have to find it first. I left everything I own... In One Piece". That's all it took for the whole to go crazy! What are the Marines doing watching innocents die? A turning point in a young boy's life will lead to the birth of the greatest marine the world has ever seen. Note: > Every action from the MC will create a domino effect on the original story. There will be some changes from the original One Piece story. > Although the One Piece timeline is used and the world around it. THE MC'S FRUIT DOES NOT FOLLOW THE RULES OF THE ORIGINAL WORKS! ******* I do not own the picture used for this novel, all credit to the artist who designed it.*********** If there is any feedback, send it my way.

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Had to end my reading of this novel at chapter 84. The WG cutting of the entire Marines, which is essentially their state military, because they chose to let some self-righteous upstart run around freely doing w.e he wants, even though they're aware his DV is special, should be a deal breaker for any One Piece fan. Not only did this Author butcher One Piece's established history by inserting his MC as a destined one, he also showed zero respect to the characters by lowering their IQ to make things convenient for his MC. It's lazy and forces the readers to dumb down their own intelligence just so they can carry on reading. The MC, as well, has no semblance of a personality. All he has is motivation, and that's it. The 1 dimension to his personality is he is self-righteous and thinks he can do anything he wants as long as he thinks it's right, leading to him and his thoughts being more frustrating to read than the fact that everyone around him is several times dumber than their canon counterparts. Not that the other characters feel 'real' either. The OCs have no personality and it's impossible to distinguish them if not for their codenames. The only way to salvage this god-awful novel is to switch the pov to the straw hats and just focus on their interactions with the MC. Not that it matters when the WG is literally going to war against their own military for the dumbest reason a mentally functional person could think of. All in all, the only good thing about this fanfic is the pacing. And that's just talking about pacing relatively, given that One Piece fanfics tend to rush through the timeline like they're never going to run out of content. I probably missed a lot of flaws but I don't think it matters. This should be enough to discourage enough with half a brain from reading this god-awful take on One Piece.

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