Fractured Through Time

Maybe I'm biased towards such texts but this novel is great. The plot is exciting and it has a wide room for extending itself. It seems to have consitantly good writing and I don't think it will disapoint anyone! 11/10

Its really really interesting story if you loved any of the journey movies (journey to the center of the earth or journey to the mysterious island) you will love this it has on of craziest world buildings you can see even from the very first chapter out there love you author for writing such a fabulous piece of art

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The story is very catching and captivating. Nice plot I most say. The description is amazing. The synopsis also is very attractive. Can't wait to indulge in this novel.

I feel as though the writing quality could be improved as the author's descriptive ability is currently lacking but it's not actually bad enough for u to repulse it its actually quite doable basically a cake with all the ingredients but missing the icing that makes it look better and more attractive. The book all in all albeit 1 chapter isn't too bad and I can say that its a good first try for the author

Good Novel! Love the premise. Good grammar and world building. Hope to see more chapters soon. I wish you good luck in WSA. This has a lot a potential.

it got a nice idea bro you tell the story and details nice .. however it would be very nice if continue the chapter a bit and add something that triggered more of there curiousity. hope you guys continue doing good work.

Wowey! Someone call an ambulance because I have no breath left! Just jokes. This debut chapter is one of, if not the best chapter I have read on this website. It includes many elements such as the beginnings of great character structure as well as building this fantastic world. I feel like I relate dearly to the main character and even made be shed a tear once or twice. I do have a few things I would like to suggest to a new author such as this brilliant one. I believe the characters should be balanced between genders and race so that it reaches and relates to the vaster majority of people. Then we can go main stream baby! I also LOVE the early mentions of the main character’s north-eastern roots and how he used to kick the sand out of boredom out the front of his bedroom window. I also use to do this but instead of sand, it was my hamster. Another point I would like to bring up during this opportunity to contact such an epic author is that your choice of title is perfect for such a tone and storyline. Even though we have not yet been emerged into the world of time in the story, I feel that I have been deeply impacted as time travels super fast while reading this book because of how emerged I get when reading it. I know for a fact that other readers feel the same way. For me, I have spent 4 hours so far reading over this 1st chapter and drawing what I believe the characters and world looks like. I have also ordered a custom bed spread from Etsy with my drawing on it. 5 stars any day.

Very fun read! can't wait for more. The characters were very interesting and I cant wait to see how they will develop over the chapters. [img=recommend]

Great story so far. Excellent storytelling. I was hooked from the first paragraph. I liked the suspense and mystery. The author did an amazing job of giving vivid descriptions. I've already added the book to my library and looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Good novel. interesting start. It has a lot of potential. Perhaps because there is only one chapter, I can't give you a fully review but from what I have read, it is excellent so far. I hope hope you continue.

the book is exciting to read, and the plot and characters are outstanding I must say your book is amazing and you have quality grammar, an excellent author I can't wait for the next chapter

WOW! I love this book so much it is very great and awesome. This book is truly deserving of 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Superb storytelling,the setting is refined,the detail is refined and the intense of each stanza is like a fresh patch of dopamine thats keeps the reader in high suspense.There is a tiny bit of grammatically but those can be reworked easily.Overrall a good hook and a good writing continue to pursue greater heights with my full support!

I like story where there is adventure and mystery like this i am really curious about what will happen in the future. Keep writing like this you have my full support

The book is wonderful, I love the story line, I love the idea of everything, The book looks promising, the settings are okay, Keep it up, cant wait for your updates.

the premise is interesting, the world-building is done greatly, and the elaborated explanation is perfect. this novel seems very promising. So far there's nothing to nitpick

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For now, the World background is clear, though it was hard for me to visualize it clearly, you should add more details and make it extravagant so we can clearly imagine it.