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Flames of Justice (Completed)

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Ryu came to the Naruto World with one goal and one goal only! HE WILL DANCE WITH THE BEST BY ANY MEANS NECESSARY!

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Chapter 1One man and a Frog, can't we just get along?

A young man in his 20s looked on at the Uchiha clan being exterminated with a complicated expression.

Couldn't be helped!

He was too weak to do anything about it.

This was Uchiha Ryu!

Let's roll the timeline back a bit…

Around a dozen years ago~

A little boy with long spiky jet black hair munched on a super sweet mochi candy.

This little boy was very cute, unbelievably cute! If you didn't look closely, you'd think he was a girl!

What was he supposed to do? His handsome looks were a curse, you know!

Anyway!

He was sitting in class listening to a teacher talk about Ninja things and the Will of Fire. He wasn't too interested in it at all. You have to know this brainwashing routine is really effective!

Just look at the start of the chapter!

Itachi and Shisui were brainwashed so hard that they exterminated their own clan!

This is like saying 'The US is too strong, so I'm gonna blow up the entire Eastern half'

How does that even make sense?

The western half has almost 4 people in total…

Anyway!

Ryu turned his head to the beautiful big sister girl next to him, munching on the mochi while staring at her cute face.

He had to admit, this girl was really beautiful!

Brown pupiless eyes, violet hair with a spiky ponytail, juicy lips, and a cute little nose.

Ryu devoured the mochi and looked at her, greedily taking in her looks.

Who else but Anko!?

Anko turned to him and grimaced, saying angrily "What are you looking at?!" Ryu burped and patted his flat stomach, grinning "You." Anko glared at him and turned away.

Ryu chuckled and flipped out another mochi ball!

The teacher stopped and looked over saying "Uchiha Ryu! Do you have something to say?"

Everyone turned to look at Ryu, who stood up, grinning widely.

His grin was full of triangular teeth, it looked very demonic and eerie, but it was mostly because he was a bit nervous.

Ryu didn't know when but he suddenly developed the 'Shinra Syndrome' from Fire Force.

As a result, he could only grin like this when he was nervous, excited, happy, sad, etc.

Kinda like the victims of the SMILE fruits, except he didn't laugh.

He said loudly "I like Anko-chan!"

Anko blushed and kicked him, scolding angrily "Bastard!"

The teacher was not expecting that and was a bit dumbfounded.

The other kids looked at each other before bursting into laughter.

Another boy pointed at Ryu and laughing "Stupid Ryu! You confessed!?" Ryu barked out, "Shut up, Obito! At least I have the guts!" as his grin widened.

Yes! Ryu was currently in class with Obito, Rin, Guy, Asuma, Kurenai, etc.

Kakashi graduated already.

Ryu knew Kakashi very well, actually they played together a long time ago, then he graduated and left because he was a genius.

Ryu had naturally been practicing, he was also a genius, but geniuses in Konoha were like vegetables. You can find them anywhere.

So he was pushed out and not really paid attention to.

However, that was all about to change!

Just last night, Ryu got a special package!

Maybe a late prompt or something but a system like existence sounded in his mind and gave him a gift pack before disappearing.

There weren't any missions, quests, tasks, goals, explanations, nothing!

Only a damn red frog that gave him the finger and hopped away into the void after dropping off a gift box in his mind.

Too fucking annoying!

Ryu vowed to kill that damn frog if he saw it again!

Anyway~

What he got was truly extraordinary!

1. Ryujin Jakka integration

And 2. Garp Template!

Ryu was so happy he fainted! But when he woke up he looked at the gifts carefully.

Turns out, it wasn't so broken and god-like….

Ryujin Jakka integrated with his body and replaced his Chakra nature to pure flames. Not only that but they were hotter than normal.

Ryu found out that because of the rules of the world, he can only unlock Ryujin Jakka's shikai temperature when he gets Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and Bankai temperature when he gets Rinnegan…

Otherwise, it'll be 3000 degrees when he opens Mangekyou…

But even then, it's 500 degrees for 1 Tomoe Sharingan, 1000 for 2 Tomoe, and 1500 for 3 Tomoe!

Ryu scratched his head and complained that this was simply too ruthless right?

First of all, he can't even touch the flames himself. This was the basic Chakra Fire Style Jutsu, you spit out flames, etc. normally ninja can't touch them.

Also! 1500 degrees sounded strong, but Terumi Mei's Lava Escape was 1700 degrees and what did she do? Absolutely nothing!

A waste of a woman!

Ryu felt that his true potential would be unlocked at Mangekyou Sharingan. He didn't know why but he felt that would be the case.

As for the Garp template, it was self-explanatory.

As you unlock more of the Garp Template %, the stronger you'll be!

So the only thing to do was train, train, and train some more!

Thankfully, Ryu was a knowledgeable guy. The true Uchiha style was taijutsu! These new age fools only swagger around with Sharingan like they were the best!

Meanwhile, Madara hung up the entire ninja world with only taijutsu.

The template came with all of Garp's abilities, so he would get Armament, Observation, and Conqueror's eventually. It was only a matter of time.

Ryu didn't have big dreams, he wanted to be a simple guy here.

Of course that didn't mean if he could save people he wouldn't!

His heart burned with the flames of justice!

Literally!

Ryu's biggest dream was to dance with Madara, just imagining it made him drool. He didn't even want to beat him, leave it to the Protagonists, he just wanted to fight Madara with everything he had, how cool would that be?!

Until then, he couldn't die!

No matter what.

With these two powers, his Uchiha Ryu would soar to the sky!

And so, the scene goes back to the classroom.

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WiseHermit
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Another one of Monkeys stories, which boasts top notch writing quality, as well as great comedy. I enjyed this so far, but i have to say iam euqally disappointed at how some things where handled. Without wanting to spoiler too much, i cant get myself to like this MC, which is rooted in the fact that the essence of what the author tries to depict as the main crisis, is actually just denial and weak character. Despite the MC having enough strength to prevent virtually any disaster which is about to fall upon the world, he chooses not to because of his GRAND goal. Up till chapter 58 he is ready to leave behind his wife, his newborn child, his adoptive sons, and his village and friends, as well as let a world war break out all just so he can accomplish that. SURELY it must be something groundbreaking and deeply important right? Well... no. The grand reason why he allows peril to befall the nations, and its inhabitants, as well as the reason why he is willing to ignore the pleads of his family and is set on abandoning them, is so that he can die fighting one man. o.O ... Yeah thats it. Even if it now seems as he now is not set on dying anymore, it portrays just how shallow and illusionary everything in his new life was to MC, and it makes all the people around him and his actions and accomplishments so far seem insignificant and really just insincere. And all because of the excuse that he otherwise wouldnt have a goal or meaning in life. Yeah... not like you have children and a wife to care for. Not like you have people to protect. Not like you have their future to enjoy but well lets move on. The second big aspect i really dont like in this story is the romance. Without giving away too much, MC basically relentlessly chases after a girl for multiple years, before he finally manages to change her mind, and they fall in love with each other. Or so it seems. Until the day that MC loses his mentor/father figure, and adopts a big responsibility, while he is being antagonized by a big portion of the village. He is at his lowest and needs help and love more than ever before. Surely she will aid him in this time of grief and need right? ... right? Yeah no. She walks out the door without so much as a word, not even saying goodbye, and ghosts him for a whole year. Then out of nowhere she knocks on his door again with tears in her eyes and apologizes. Turns out now it is her sensei who left(not dead tho), and she SUDDENLY realized that MC meant the world to her. Totally not forgetting the fact that she didnt even visit him a single time in 365 days. Throwing away every ounce of pride and selfrespect MC has, he accepts her with a smile on his face and they live together from that point on. Iam not saying that their interactions after that seem insincere, but like many other aspects of a good story, the foundation of a romantic relationship will remain in the heads of the reader, and how it was depicted here, it was basically just her running away and abandoning MC at the first sign of responsibility and hardships. Yes it was a big task for a young girl, but MC never asked her to do anything, and even if she didnt fell up to it, she couldve just said something. Yeah all in all this story has major shortcomings, and i didnt even dwell too much on the almost non-existent action, or the fact that the MC throughout the whole story just becomes a side character whose only purpose is to take blame without the need for any one to do so. He also just becomes a piggybank for the village to get new techniqes, and basically regresses into a teacher. That was a lot, but I will nevertheless say that this story does provide good slapstick comedy and interesting original ideas, which still makes it worth to read. Iam just severly underwhelmed, because we have seen Monkey do so much better. There is not really a lot of substance here and at some point The story just became a narration of how some dude amped up Konoha.

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