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Fires Beyond

作者: TheMa_n
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Vaam had never expected much from life. He didn't wish to Love, nor to Hate, he never wished to cause pain, nor to end lives. All he ever wanted was to have a tranquil death... With the very concept of his identity shattered. With the lives of his people standing near the very trenches of hell. With the layers of filth and lies sinking to let place to his true condition. There was no other way anymore... Vaam would die at war.

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TheMa_n
TheMa_n作者TheMa_n

Unquestionably evil author here. This review serves 3 purposes. - To set an expectation, so you and I don't end up being utterly disappointed in each other. - To answer some basic questions about Fires Beyond. - To kindly self-promote. Merry Christmas. So what is Fires Beyond? It is a sci-fi novel settled in a universe in which humanity is not alone anymore... We will follow our main protagonists as they struggle to survive in the frozen desert that is Pluto, and quite probably escape it. Cool. Are there superpowers? Yes. Yes, there are 'superpowers' introduced not that later on. Humanity learned to modify their genes to their advantage, creating so-called 'variants', however, each modification comes at a cost... Nice. Any romance? I don't know. Depending on how popular this thing becomes I may decide to introduce some lovi dovi to the whole thing. Or maybe I'll just brutally murder her for some juicy character development. It all depends on you guys, so do us proud!!! . ... Very cool. So why did I rate myself 4.8 stars? Writing Quality: English is not my mother language (It's Spanish) and I really think I did a good job at polishing grammatical quality. Humbly: [4/5]. Stability of Updates: This thing will keep updating daily until I decide to kill it off. That will probably happen because no one will give it the time of day, so shame on you. [5/5] Story Development: [Big Bad Obstacle > Suffering > Cool Power Boost]. I have nothing else to say, just ride the dopamine roller coaster with me. [5/5] Character Design: I won't allow any of my characters to feel like they are made out of cardboard, they all have their reasons and their flaws. [5/5] World Background: Building lore is fun and slightly addictive. I am not an addict though, don't be mistaken. [5/5] Anyways, thanks for your time and understanding, I love you. Now go read. :}

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Writing quality: Pretty good grammar, it's readable, that alone is an achievement. Although some descriptions are too abstract. Stability of Updates: That looking good. Story Development: The premise it's pretty original and thrilling, it's had little time to develop, so I'm excited to see what cooks out of it. Character Design: The MC feels like a compelling character with lots of room to develop, and the side characters do not feel like NPCs, so good on that. World Background: Decent lore so far. Keep it up.

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