FATE of DxD

Chapter 16 was a huge disappointment and even spoiled the story for me. his "MC" chose to be born from a faction to be free, he even chose the human race and could choose several better races, here comes chapter 16 where you make him become an azazel pawn, man, that just made the previous chapters and your own choice before, becomes a cliche filler for me. and the worst thing is that by his choice he ended up orphaned, human, weak and couldn't even eat for lack of money from the orphanage, but at least he had his freedom, but then you come to me with this one of becoming a pawn of the angels fallen, that at first he made his choice of race and faction, but now seems silly. made me lose interest.

i don't understand what mc is doing anymore learning skills he won't use even though he has knowledge encyclopedia of nasu world and he can train to op by himself he now goes to azazel to become his lap dog i can't understand why the author has to nerf mc he has many ways to become powerful but seven years gone by, he is still a mob

First of all the author only cares about his p.a.t.r.e.o.n. and word count. He pastes this massive stat sheet after each chapter and plugs hi p.a.t at the beginning and end of each chapter also. It is filled to the brim with lame cliché story tropes. He chooses to be a normal factionless human then jumps in with Azazel 15 chapters in. Doesn't even know how parameters work. Even just E rank means 10 times stronger than a normal human, yet he struggles against a couple exorcists who are pretty much just athletic humans, who rely on Holy weapons and some simple training. Whole thing needs a rewrite with less focus on word count and lame tropes.

if you want a novel that is: no character development, continuous increases in power and successive nerfs to make him lame, 3 chapters of information copied from wiki and half a chapter of history ... this novel is for you. If you are looking for a job done well, with an understandable story, with a charismatic mc and some unpredictable action and twists, then you are trying to read the wrong story. The only point in favor of this "story" is that you can say what you want in the comments, so much so the author doesn't read them and he is only interested in you going to give him money on pa.treon. After the last chapter I read today I personally delete the story from the library, I leave this comment just to help some of the new readers avoid a story with great potential, made painful by a writer who only chases the word count and the advertising for pa.treon.

I was disappointed with every chapter I read. You could have done a lot differently. could have given dxd the holy grail with the added ability to summon servant's to use in battle or to install in the form of class cards. Instead, you followed the same path that more than half of the authors do. The MC basically doesn't care about anything, using and manipulating everyone without caring. Character Development 0. Shallow relationships that try to look deep in the worst possible way. I'm not against a power fantasy story, but it has to be done well and carefully. I'm not saying your story is rubbish, but for me she lacks a lot in terms of quality.

The basic idea is nice, the possibilities of the novel are many .... but the author wastes them, often copying and pasting the data just to fill up a chapter. The flaws are many, but I highlight especially 3. 1: It gets frustrating to see whole chapters where the mc gains a power ... and then the chapter after that power gets nerfed. 2: entire chapters of the state of the mc, almost without variations, just a long copy and paste. 3: The intelligence of the mc sometimes seems poor, and his powers useless in many situations, he gets his arm burned like an idiot emeritus (and according to the author he even burned his soul ... so the arm cannot recover ....) and all when it has the magic resistance of a dragon ..... Combined with these points I also add that the author does not read the comments or interact with his audience. The icing on the cake: this story is a pa.tre.on where the author uses this platform just to advertise, so it could disappear at any moment.

They are taking this "nothingness" a bit too far. no matter how strong he gets, expect that super cool power he got the dissappear into nothingness as his next nerf comes in. He power cycles, get powers then within 10 chapters he'll be nerfed and gain a new power. rinse and repeat. It's not even good reasons for the nerfs either. *Takes 2 blasts from Gilgamesh EA* Totally fine. Optional boss god like boss that is a "test" from the root? hmm let's fight this overpowered entity to see if I can scratch it. *gets smacked so hard he gets another nerf* some of the early minor nerfs don't make sense. 'OH you got stronger and opened your connection to the root?' well those root given powers are incompatible with the root so say goodbye to them. After reading his other novel I thought this one would be just as amazing but they can't even be compared.

This has gone down hill fast. The nerfs are becoming more common and they don’t even make sense some of the time. The mc lost his arm in one chapter, but the way he lost it doesn’t make sense to the story because one of his abilities should have prevented it from happening. It started off well but it has gotten worse, and I am not confident about it improving. If you don’t mind only reading the start of the story then read it, but otherwise I would advise you to avoid this one.

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This story in short is just copy and paste of the status page of his system every 5 chapters he gets nerfed for the stupidest reasons I dropped this book a week ago and The only thing about this book I can remember is the needless long status about three times every chapter and the nerfs every other chapter

Il just write this, I've read the authors danmachi novel and it was way better. This was nice, until the mc started getting nerfed every few chapters, he gets some great ability that he never ends up using, then he does something stupid or something random happens and he loses it, when he got nerfed for the FIFTH, FIFTH TIME! I just couldn't go on anymore. It's just too much for meespecially when the stat sheet of skills and noble phantasms that he will never get to use takes up half a chapter and then he loses the the following one. The story is just mind numbingly frustrating, it could have been so good, but the author seems to enjoy reducing the mc iq and randomly crippling him constantly.

I read 50ish chapter so far and feel some what burnt out... I got to say like most people. Cons. 1- to much info dump on stats. 2- to much nerfing. Sorry to say this, but he could have been op and be a chill mc at the same time would have been a good book to read. In your pace type of mc. 3- Continues from the nerfing is your forcing plot. like losing his arm, or forcing him to tank a op hit when he could have stop it. What the point in giving him massive amount of luck. 4- the system is useless... don't know why you gave him a system if you gunna nerf him everytime. Feels like the system = info dumps. Pros. There is only one and that is your writing is readable. In conclusion is your novel worth patron? No. When it be worth it? After you stop nerfing and info dumping your mc. Will you ever read my post probably not, but it will help other people to know what is the problems with this novel. So they don't have to repeatedly saying the same thing everyone else had said about the flaws on this novel.

I'm at chapter 80 and I've given up to those who sees this the weak to strong tag is a lie he starts weak for sure and the he becomes modertly good and thats it he is never strong because when he does he be NERFED one way or another. The chapters are filled with copy and paste of his status and whats been added and whats been taken away, you would also believe that "oh your at chapter 80 something must be good" and I say I don't know anymore, the chapters have been filled with so much copy and paste I've begun to forget the story at this point I only remember that he wanted to be free but even that is useless (please don't mind my ramble here)because of fate nobody is free from fate the moment somebody is born they are a slave to fate even gods of fate only act out its will, he also joins the fallen angel instead so the author could have a easier time to get into plot if that even exists. I don't recommend to read this I've finally decided to drop this please stop giving this five stars and start giving the truth.

Now i know why is this not popular Too many information Idiotic decision that lead to more complacated problem that can be avoided in the first place Like befriending issei he could have avoided it and just take the sacred gear and now because of befriending issei he already gotten his first problem irena Author you are just forcing the plot to just get a girl it looks bad my dude youre mc is supposed to be smart that what you are presenting him to us reader but common the decisions it is dumb thats why no one read this

Character keeps being nerfed for barely any reason, cliches are overused and is also badly written to the point where I stopped reading fanfictions for a while and focused on my own.

mc keeps being repitedly nerfed, i dont get how the author can like this stuff, well its like how an author likes ntr or writes about it, similar except its nerfing the mc, its not fun at all, instead its extremely frustrating.

The novel started out interesting until the author started posting his skills every chapter as a way to pad the word count then later in the story the mc gets op and the author hits him with a nerf then he gets op then nerf and it happens over and over

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They are taking this "nothingness" a bit too far. no matter how strong he gets, expect that super cool power he got the dissappear into nothingness as his next nerf comes in. He power cycles, get powers then within 10 chapters he'll be nerfed and gain a new power. rinse and repeat. It's not even good reasons for the nerfs either. *Takes 2 blasts from Gilgamesh EA* Totally fine. Optional boss god like boss that is a "test" from the root? hmm let's fight this overpowered entity to see if I can scratch it. *gets smacked so hard he gets another nerf* some of the early minor nerfs don't make sense. 'OH you got stronger and opened your connection to the root?' well those root given powers are incompatible with the root so say goodbye to them. After reading his other novel I thought this one would be just as amazing but they can't even be compared.

bruh this is like the worst fic you ever done no joke, I had hopes for it but like every 10 or more chapters you nerf the mc for some stupid and it's always after an upgrade or training arc the only reason I'm not one staring it is because I like the concept of a mc having fate power's in dxd. wish you actually read the comments and get a feedback to see how much people enjoy it or not, but oh well people who come to this fic can only expect a lot of nerfing that's pretty much all I got to say it had potential but athour killed it.